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| Kari*Light 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseO... THsi IS SO Sweet! I Had A tear moment! lol very good! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| pink-writer 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* that's so sad and sweet at the same time! hope you make another one... it's really great! *sniff* |
| Ashly 2004-06-15 ch 1, | abuseo.o whoa...total 180 from the fluff u write o.o...but good non the less!:D Banana likesy!>. |
| Fox of Light 2004-06-12 ch 1, | abuse*sob* That was so sad! It made me cry. *sob* But it was so good. |
| GoldenRainbow 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abuseHI! i think this is a really great sad Takari story! Takari is my fav couple, they're just so cute 2gether and everything! don't think it's aweful at all cause it's NOT take it from me my stories suck and i only have 2. check them out and review them, but don't be 2 mean about thme i cannot write! -Kayci |
| Pickledevil 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abusegood fic. but so sad! :( poor tk. |
| Gundamwinggirl 2004-06-09 ch 1, | abuse*sniff sniff* This is really so sad! I can't believe that Kari died!..I think I'll crawl in a corner and cry for T.k... |
| SVZ 2004-06-09 ch 1, | abuse*sniffs* That's so sad... I demand you write a happy TxH fic! *pouts while still crying* I feel so sorry for Takeru... I really liked the way you wrote it though, it's really nicely done. |
| Mimi_102 2004-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMFG THIS STORY IS SOO SAD IM CRYING! ITS SOO SAD !:'( I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! |
| Cute Dragon~too lazy too si... 2004-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg! Kari died! aww that was so good. I liked this very much ^_^, keep writting. |
| ShineyEye 02 2004-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was so sad. Poor, poor Takeru, didn't even get the chance to tell Hikari he loved her. Nice job here buddy. Takari roxx! Happy writing. |