 wolfie 2005-06-09 . chapter 16 oh please write more |
 ashley 2005-06-09 . chapter 7 good fic. happy birthday to you! I'm 14 too! please keep writing. |
 xCharisma 2004-08-10 . chapter 16Wow, that is soc cute, one of the best endings ever. Are you making a sequel? ause his is the type of fic that needs one, I wouldn't mind if you didn't cause I'll be reading and waiting for your other fics, lols |
 xCharisma 2004-08-09 . chapter 15Aww, this chapter is so kawaii, aw poor Tala, he's heart broken, can't wait for the finale!
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 xCharisma 2004-08-09 . chapter 14really good, sorry for not reviewing earlier for both chapters! |
 xCharisma 2004-08-04 . chapter 13what's going on with theat new girls hand? wow lols hope you update soon. |
 The-Dark-Fire-Elf 2004-08-03 . chapter 13boo ya! that was agreat chapter as usual! see ya at school :P |
 xCharisma 2004-08-02 . chapter 12Alomst finished, yay! but I'm sad that's it's gonna end *sigh*. Wow honestly I love fanfics like this, where the couple doesn't like form till near the end, that's way cool!! Lols, hope you update soon with a long chapter lols. |
 The-Dark-Fire-Elf 2004-08-01 . chapter 12mwhahahahaha *coughs* anyway... great chapter!
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 xCharisma 2004-07-31 . chapter 11*Screams* Omg I lovve it! It's like so bloody good! Lols hope you update soon! |
 The-Dark-Fire-Elf 2004-07-31 . chapter 11hey... great chapter... well done! i'll see u on monday *smiles*
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 StarAngel Caelum SunSoar 2004-07-30 . chapter 11I love the flashbacks! It was very detailtive! I like the way you wrote everything. Very nice indeed...i wait for the future chapters!
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 x_xDreamerx_x 2004-07-26 . chapter 10 Hey,
I love this please update! It has an awesome plot and I love your characters. :D But ya update please :D |
 xCharisma 2004-07-26 . chapter 10Reallu good chapter, poor Riley, that's like so harsh, well I'd really be happy if you could update Can I ever forgive you, like it seemed so sad and cute, lols can't wait.
Harder to breathe is cool too, but I personally enjoyed Can I ever forgive you better, it's really catchy, lols bye bye! |
 The-Dark-Fire-Elf 2004-07-25 . chapter 10u know u wrote a good chapter so i don't have to say that it was excellent ;) see ya tomorrow
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