|Reviews for The other truth|
| Rorysan 2/9/06 . chapter 15
I loved the story so far! i can't wait for the next chapter! Bye for now!
| Tigerlily 2/5/06 . chapter 15
Kinda interesting story:)would like to read more. It's not bad but you have a few grammar mistakes, and you mix up your and you're..which you perhaps should fix. And try to be more clear when you jump from one thing to another in the chapter. Add some spaces, and remember that the readers can't see into the writers head so everything may not always be as clear for them as it's for you. Just keep that in mind when you're writing.
| bandgsecurtiyaw 12/10/05 . chapter 15
great story i cant wait for more all of you chapters were great i would have reviewed each and every one but i only have a short amount of time on the internet with my laptop so when i find a story that interests me i open all the chapters in different windows and read the whole thing later and then review the last chapter but when you update i will try and review that chapter this was one of the best stories so far i hope that you continue to update and dont abondon this story
| Lady Elora 10/17/05 . chapter 15
Wow, excellent chapter. It was awesome to see how quickly you updated after I read this story. That was sweet. I thought it was hysterical when Harry#2 started to flirt with Ginny. :) Oh, and I think I must of missed this somewhere...but I got confuddled...why do you call Harry#2, James? Just wondering. :) Update soon! :)
| Marguerida 10/17/05 . chapter 15
*hmpf* Not good, not good, really bad *ducks*
Those evil cliffys should be punished by the law.
The chapter was fantastic. I could really imagine how Azkaban looked like. That's not a place where I would like to stay, not even for a second. Poor Sirius.
Can't wait to read the next chapter
| Lady Elora 10/15/05 . chapter 14
I know the last time you updated this story was in May..but since I just spent a whole darned hour reading this story...couldn't you please finish it? Pretty please? :) It was enrapturing...I couldn't stop. Excellent work mate! :)
| Marguerida 10/9/05 . chapter 14
When are you going to continue? Will Harry ever see Sirius, James and Lily again or will he stay in his world?
Hope there will be a new chapter soon.
| whitewingedstallion 9/5/05 . chapter 3
the thing about writing stories on this fanfiction thing is that anyone can take your ideas and make it their own..its not fair and it shouldnt be allowed, but seeing as its not exactly copywritten you cant do anything...i know it sucks, but just try to ignore it...now people know you've done this idea and it wasn't her...but the story is great by the way...im finally coming into it...i think its really bloody brilliant!...lol...see ya
| whitewingedstallion 9/5/05 . chapter 2
im kinda confused...umm..is the story about harry dreaming of what it would be like to live in a world without voldemort?...or...is he dreaming what it would be like to live with all the people who have died in his life?...it just sounds liek the second one, maybe i missed something..but it is good dont get me wrong...awsome work!
| whitewingedstallion 9/5/05 . chapter 1
this is a cool little chappy..i really like it, dont worry ill write more on the other chpaters _ good job though!
| Kira6 8/6/05 . chapter 14
| The Soapy Kid 7/12/05 . chapter 14
| Ilana Starr 5/3/05 . chapter 14
Yay! Save Sirius! :) lol.
| sile 5/2/05 . chapter 1
Just a little bit of helpful advice in England people arent allowed to get a licence until they are 17 liking the story though
| Horus 5/2/05 . chapter 14
I love the idea, and I love your writing... I was kinda hoping that seeing as everything else in James Harry Potters world was pretty much reverse, that the Headmaster would be Tom Riddle, but I can understand it might not be such a good Idea. Keep Writing Please! The Idea kinda reminds me of an episode of Star Trek: TNG when the Enterprise finds a carbon coby Riker who was stuck on a planet for years. He ends up taking the name Thomas (Will Rikers Middle Name) and then eventually turns "Evil", that being he joins a group of Freedom fighters. Anyway. Love the work.