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| Zen Jericho 2008-03-01 ch 2,  | abuseLol that I love Lucy refrence was cool |
| Mistress of Earth 2007-10-25 ch 6, | abusehope you update really soon (its been a year since you last updated). |
| Mistress of Earth 2007-10-25 ch 4, | abusei thought Wantz was O'aka's cousin? |
| Mistress of Earth 2007-10-25 ch 3, | abuseoctopus? dude, thats random. LOL |
| Kurissyma san Tybalt 2007-03-23 ch 6, | abuseI'll be waiting for the next chaptwer, k? |
| Kurissyma san Tybalt 2007-03-23 ch 3, | abuseHehe, cool old Miroku and his cursed hand :P At least Nadie's doesn't /wander/ like his :P I don't think they're at all related. I didn't think of Inuyasha at all when I read about Nadie. Don't worry. |
| Kurissyma san Tybalt 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like it, all good, I just thought I'd point out that there is no 'english' in pira. Only 'Common' and 'Al Bhed'. Cyaz! Xx-Becks-xX |
| Micayasha 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry to sound rude, but... there is absolutely NO way Baralai would've taken that sphere. The day he steals homemade porn is the day Paine dresses up in a frilly tutu and prances through the streets of Luca... Also, it's not English - it's Spiran. Hey, as for the names - you took their Spiran names and translated them both into and out of Al Bhed, didn't you? And on occasion scrambled some Spiran and Al Bhed together. I liked Respect Points very much - I just think Baralai is very out of character in this chapter. |
| Someones Girl 2006-06-26 ch 6, | abusevery interesting and exciting keep updating soon x |
| Kitsu Kurasei 2006-06-14 ch 6, | abuseHmm, maybe... Or like 'Unwilling Prophet' considering what they're trying to make the poor girl do. Eh, but that's just 'cause I like fancy names. Or even 'Purification' since I'm hearing 'genocide' intonations left and right from these "Taika" people. Yeah, I like the second one. Still, you're the author. Best to ya, Kitsu. |
| marajade963 2006-06-13 ch 6, | abuseI really like this story. I must say it does have a few twists in it. I cant wait to see what happens next. |
| TianaFX 2006-05-14 ch 5, | abuseomg, never been a nooj/leblanc fan but my goodness you portey there love,sadness and longing, like i've never seen, amazing you should work mor eon that and you'd be very sucessfull |
| YaoiIsLove 2005-11-10 ch 5, | abuseGuess Who! Thats right its Rikku. I didn't know you updated your story till i just now looked at it shame on you. NE wayz nice chapter. But i just now read it so i coulde be lieing pbbt!^_~ Ciao! |
| DarkenedPetals 2005-09-26 ch 5, | abuseWho! This was really good! Well done! hehe |
| VampiricEternity 2005-05-21 ch 4, | abuseI read Respect and points and this one and I love them! Yay! I'm a bit of an eccentric...sorry. |