I would not mind being your beta. ^_^
don't worry so much about updating. if you're really that sick and harried, i think we can find it in our hearts to forgive you. :)
good luck!

I love this story.

The uniqueness that you possess through your writing style is great. It helps one to feel or imagine what is happening. I can describe it best as 'writing with colors.'

Anyways, to your story. The history lesson,was outstanding and I am amazed how much clear the concept of your story is to you. Please update soon. I would like to see how your story turns out.

Once again, update.

Great and interesting. ^_^

I really like the way you write your story. It is very interesting. Go you! It is pretty great for your first fanfic.

Moi. *_*

i understand your situation ... diabetes runs in our family as well ...

get well soon .. godbless and take care!

Wow! Your story is simply great.
Keep Updating.
I wanna knpw more.

Great story, please update soon!

Wow this story is really cool! You're a good writer! I really like it.

Please keep writing and update it soon!

i like. now this brings to question 2 things.

1. did the galbadian prince truly die when he was thrown into the river? [my guess would be yes, but you never know.]

2. what happened to the emperor's daughter? how did she end up where she is today?

ok, that's all that i will ... bug you with for now. can't wait for the next chapter. please don't take as long this next time.

Hey this is great, a few grammar errors here and there, but its no biggy. I'm liking it a lot. I hope you update soon cos this is a great read, its very very good for your first story! :)

Really good chaper

I cant wait to see how this story goes

Hope u update it soon

hey! this is good stuff! a little rush around the end, but its still good! hope to see more from you.

I know you said no flamer but i had to say ... nothing bad! I realy loved it its a good start. Please write more and post soon since i know how you hate it when others dont update theirs. You need only to.. help me with mine. lata~ Cucumber

Wow...And you say this is your first fanfic?! This is really great! Please update soon!
_RIOT_

This sounds like a very good story. You have some really good ideas going here, and the way you write it is very catchy. I'm interested in reading more, hope you update it soon.

Real interesting story there

I cant wait to see where it goes

Hope u update it soon