Wow.

I'm...dunno. Crashed against a wall would maybe start to describe it. But that's not it.

You're story is brilliant. Or should I say stories? I started reading Fine Lines yesterday evening, than had to stop for sleeping and going to university and found myself right back to it today.
I read it, and continued to read first Shades of Grey and then One Moment without being able to stop. Even though it got me past midnight.

You are amazing. In between I was laughing so hard, got annoyed at Ron and other, was happy with Harry as his American friends came, cried when Harry did, got more and more anxious as the fate of the wizarding world grew worse and worse and finally had my heart aching with for all of the love in your story.

You're characterisation is simply fabulous. Non of the inhabitants of your story felt out of character. Everyone had their reasons for acting the way they did even though you often enough left your readers in the dark as to why exactly that was. IC is something I request for everystory that wants to be called somewhat good, but you made it great.

Another plus for that given the secrets away bit by bit. I makes the reader just absolutely anxious to know what's going on. They are guessing and questioning their guesses again and again.(at least I did^^)

Also the way you pull your readers into the story, leave them feeling so much. As I already said: My heart ached for them, especially in those moments when either Harry or Draco let their loved ones away, because they felt so much for them. I was nearly crying then.

If I was to go into further detail I would have to add every single line of your stories and post a comment to it.

I haven't been moved by any story that much for a long time.


Thank you for having written such a beautiful peace of art and for sharing it with me.

Gil

I don't think I've ever cried so much!! I admit I have a habbit of being mushy but seriously it was that touching... I cried three chapters straight!!

KCK-Lumcer

This was so incredibly touching and sad. I love your stories and I'll read 'written in the sand' next.. But how I wished this would end well... :( x
Nikki

the impromptu adults quidditch match was genius! i nearly died laughing.

great job!

great chapter!

adorable prelogue!! it's fantastic!

I've been reading this series for the past 2 days; each one building and making my dreams crazier than most nights! You are absolutely a fantistic writer and your plot blends the best and the worse of the human condition. You should be applauded for that and I am applauding.

~and crying

I had to stop many times reading this story because I couldn't see the computer screen through my sobbing. I will follow you to you other space and hopefully, somewhere in the saddness of this tragedy, the phoenix will rise and the hopes of all of us, your readers, will be renewed. Your gift for writing is surely a gift from whatever diety you choose to follow. Thank you.

you are an incredible writer!

Oh wow. Beautifully written. Poignant and eloquent. I look forward to reading the next segment.

Good cliff hanger!

:0 OH MY GOSH!! That was so amazing!

that was...wow!! I have tears rolling down my face! amazing!

that's just too great!!

You wrote a good story I read these stories to smile and get away from so much sorrow this story was full of misery just as bad as real life can be I might as well turn on the news and read the paper cover to cover I will not get angry with you if you stop writing to be fair I will do what I to;d your reader to do I will move on.