First off, sorry for taking so long to get another review in, but you know why. As for the content, I have one thing to say: Whoa... The duel was great, and the magician evilly appropriate. The epilogue, though, truly marks you as a suspense writer. I mean, c'mon, that's just plain evil! Is he dead, or not!? Come on man, throw a brother a bone here! Just, keep 'em coming, or I'll have a real bone to pick! j/k. It was good, and please do keep 'em coming!

hey! rmb me? heh i FINALLY finished the trilogy... and i find a cliffie?!?!? U... U... QUICK conitnue!

heh :p well i wasn't into yu gi oh, which was why i didn't read this sooner... but good job, as usual! (btw lost interest in pokemon?)

Well...too latte, too late. Jade's gonna come through on this one. (pets dragons) It's okay, we waited patiently. (ignores shredded trees) Very patiently. I don't mind the wait. I really don't. It's just that when I read these stories with Kyle and Theoris in them, I get the feeling like you're just scratching the surface. Even though this one leg in your series is 25 chapters old, it feels like there can be so much more to be had.
I'd love to see more of the Ancient Egypt stuff come to light. Kyle finally realizing that Theoris is more than a nagging voice in his mind.

Anyway, that boy is going to be in for some serious hurting once you get up the next leg in this saga. In the meanwhile, I shall be playing my worldwide duel 2004 thing(that cheating Yugi), and thanks to you I now know how to call out the big guns!

A whole month! Man, I wish I had that luxury! I hope you have fun though. Lots and lots of fun. Sanga, the Black Magician of Chaos,Relinquished, and I will have fun in the meanwhile.

*eye twitch*

No! No ending! *cries* What an awesome chapter though, such a great ending!! Please write Interposed Fortunes as soon as possible!!

Noo!! Poor Kyle... ;_;

A sequel? Great!! The "epilogue" in the chapter's title worried me.
I've enjoyed every word of Shielded Destiny, Intertwined Fates and Imperiled Future. (yes, even the evil cliffies...)
About the hiatus... don't worry! We'll wait (I will, at least :P)

Ahh! Ahh! *hyperventaliate* Grr, you're mean, how could you end it there! lol But yeah, awesome chapter! I loved Monica's thoughts in the beginning... I laughed out loud. That was hilarious. Anyway, please update soon!

Wow...I must congratulate you on this mighty fine series of yours. THis has been one of the very few stories that has captured my short attention span. Very good. Poor Kyle, almost, or is, dead. Q_Q

..Ow.. wrecking.. 100 mph.. on a motorcycle.. and I thought 40 mph was bad. O.o

Blah, Kyle.. you're so selfless. All of the things that Jade has done to you, and you're still going to be nice to her. Be friends with her. Damn you and your noble self. And.. Jade.. pity-mongerer! Blah! Monkeys will eat you someday. Mr. Magician.. you're an idiot. The monkeys will eat you for desert.

Okay, Matt.. dude, seriously.. you've got me talking to the characters.. this isn't good. For me, at least. Good for you, I'd say.

Oh chuckle! Few are unaware of this fact, Kyle. I just love Theoris! That's mah boi! How could I not be pleased? Seto-tude, much?

Ok, I'm really quiet here. But only because, for some odd reason - though odd is my life, that last 11 lines sparked some major deja vu. It's crazy how reading can be so dimensional. On one hand, your eyes flit over the words and you're just reading. On the other hand, there's this amazing movie being played out, a mix of anime and live action.

If you have a day inbetween uploading the next chapter, I'll sic both my Blue Eyes and my Red Eyes on you!

WHAT?! ARE YOU NUTS?! or are you just looking for an interesting plot development?!

anyway, excellent...as always...

Whoo! What an awesome chapter for 9:23 in the morning! And, although it may sound a little random, the chapter title is just perfect for this duel. I must say, I like it! Anyway, Kyle is certainly learning how to control all of the powers that come with the Shield... that is an excellent thing! Anyway, I must be off, talk later, and please update soon!

Slowing down the pace of uploading is cool. Slowing down the pace of that horse would be even better. I didn't think you could come up with anything to top the other duels, but I was wrong. Of course, I kept on expecting the police to try to pull Kyle over. I'd guess that the magicians have some sort of cloaking spell. I almost said device. And of course, I'm pleased to see who I see at the end of this chapter.

More when you can! I'll be waiting for it. And as for Jade...I have no doubt she'll prove her worth. I have a feeling she'll more than prove it.

Woo! Very big twist indeed! Jade is no longer an enemy... she is a friend! Yay! HYPER! lol Sorry, but I'm eating a Creme Saver and my cousin is here for a few days... but that's beside the point! Yay for the story! But a quick question... how does the horse hit 150 kph? Can they really do that, or does it have to do with the fact that they're magician's horses? Anyway, please update soon!

Wow, that was pretty intens-ish. I was thinking about how much a brat Jade was being and then I was totally siding with Theoris! I think that was kind of a dumb move on Kyle's part. Ok, a really dumb move.

Yeah, I do like my dragons! But I've been dueling lately (yea, gb advance sp world tournament thing) and I've been drawing Sanga a lot. Once I used it with that Black Luster soldier. Kind of a strange name, innit?