could you maybe not center all the text? it's actually a lot harder to read that way.

*glances back up at the updates date*

...why is it that I find a story that pokes fun at Rinoa within the canon, it's left incomplete? I'll forgive you if you've lost interest, but if that's the case cn ou still try to eke out an ending? This story is pretty cool and I'd like to see how it finishes.

OMFG! This is TOO cute! WAGH! Now I just GOTTA read all the other chapters! I LOVE SeiferxSquall! It's my Fav pairing EVER! Girl, ya got some DAMN GOOD writing skills there! WHOOT!

This is amazingly wonderful goodness. It's like Squall and Seifer switched places...but neither became evil. I love the Shiva part. I love this story. I lvoe you for writing it.

This needs to update soon. Please!

Kirux

I read this story ages ago, and never did bother to write a review for it.

This is an awesome story, and I'd love to see a new chapter. I love the interaction, and while the 'sorcerer Squall and his knight Seifer' is not a new idea, this is one of the best stories I've read that uses that idea.

Rinoa...what to say about Rinoa...I used to like her, before I read FFVI fanfics...and then they corrupted me lol. She does seem a little manipulative to me, and in this story she just makes me twitch.

There was something in this chapter that came to me...but then it went away. Oh well, I'll think of it later. I'd love to see a new chapter to this story, it deserves it!

way you update soon

I really like this. Update soon!

I think you have Rinoa spot on.

And I love the SxS fluff!

ooh hope u update... wanna see some rinoa bashing

KAWAII! *huggles Squall*

Great story so far. This is a fantastic idea, I wonder why no one ever thought of it before. Looking forward to more.

I really enjoyed your story! I haven't played FF8 in years, but I sort of want to again! Also, you really should update, you know. You've got a good story going here, don't let it die like so many do! (

Interesting story, fascinating plot! I'm dead interesting, and I really like the pairing. The charecters are good and overall I like this story. Good job.

oh loved it!

please update soon ;D

wow an course i had to reread the whole thing cuz ididnt remmeber anyof it. came back fast though. and it still was as enjoyable as the first time i read it. is there any chance you might update faster? im curious about the plot. hyne'S heir. this could be very interesting. hope you don't stop writing this write!

Honestly, I'm really excited with this "heir of hyne" thing. Squall's going to PWN Ultimecia good...shove her mistake of making him sorcerer in her face. Yeah...REALLY excited. XD

Thank you for another great chapter in what has become one of my favorite fics I've ever read.