^_^ ^_^ YAY!

^_^ yay.

Elizabeth rocks.
(But Jack is hot)

It's sweet. ^_^

I like it, but, it kinda left us all hangin', ya know? It was a really good story, and you wrote it really well, but do you plan on continuing it at all?

Anyone who flames you sucks. Interesting place to start a story. I like the idea that they have a hidden history. One problem I found- last line, should read - he never did see, or he never saw. When you revise a lot it's so easy to miss stuff like that. Very nicely written otherwise. Look forward to your updates.

YAY!! yoyu finished it, it was a totally rocking ending. jack can be such a sweetie sometimes, well o well , im off to work now. good ficcie, you've got realy good talent

YAY! very good. part three was excellent, cant wait to read part four so update soon, savvy?

*claps hands* very very very good, cant wait ot find out whats gonna happen next, so please update.

Why wasn't this in JackxWill? I was in the process of leaving you a review there but my teacher saw me and told me I had to close out. Basically it said "*cries* more!" so here is my review:

*cries* MORE!

Savvy? I loved it. Pray continue.

I liked it- no need to flame... none at all- good insight into the characters

Oh I love it!I thought it was great!Are you going to make it longer?I hope you do because I thought it was great!Keep up the good work.Hope you read mine.
-Nikki

Hey! I hate slash with a passion, (bad experience with Harry Potter/Dead Father story...*shudders*) but this almost made me like it again. And not too badly spelled, even sans beta reader. I'll offer to beta read for you- my first time, but I'm stellar in English. Go Grammar Police!
Beautifully written, dear. And Jack Sparrow is a bit flamboyant, isn't he?
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