 Serenity of Paradise 9/9/06 . chapter 4please keep on writing this story it's really really touching and well written UPDATE SOON! |
 G. L. Ash 8/24/06 . chapter 4your story is awsome. are you going to finish it? |
 Ashcat 9/5/05 . chapter 4I really like this story - good job! I guess its silly to say but please update and don't leave us hanging - I LOVE stories that give Shu a backbone! |
 Kamikakushi 12/28/04 . chapter 4Chuu...I really enjoyed this fic. Like how it's going. Though I'm not gonna expect an update anytime soon, I do hope you update. Domo. |
 Mari-chan 7/18/04 . chapter 4 so good keep writing! |
 Kitty in the Box 7/6/04 . chapter 4i also think you should update! wah! its very serious. gah! i loved that msg from shu learning about yuki's 'surprise' visit on hiro. that was so mean! i remember my fic In the End where i have a scene there yuki misunderstood another shu incident only well..yuki got REALLY INSANE there! |
 Dark Shuichi 7/6/04 . chapter 4we good job nanoda! we i like it! angsty! funny (thinks of shower scene)! its great!i like it! pwease continue! |
 Shila 7/6/04 . chapter 4 I realy love your story the chapter was great i liked the message Shuichi left Yuki
please update soon |
 puffin 7/6/04 . chapter 4This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up. |
 Latest Mistake 7/6/04 . chapter 4Great job again. I'm glad you updated. I can't believe English isn't your first language. You write better than most English speakers. What I meant by making Tohma "evil" is that some people make him just that. I want him in character and to be a "shark", but not constantly trying to kill Shuichi or doing other random things that are OOC for him. You write him very well. You'd be surprised about the amount of Tohma hate, that's why I commented that you wrote him how I see him. Mainly I base my information from the manga, so I'm glad you are taking it from that as well. I loved the Tohma/Eiri interaction in this, it was very well written. Shuichi...well, I do wonder if he was a little more mean than he would normally be. But I don't mind it, everyone gets pissed off. I look forward to reading more. |
 You meanie-head 7/5/04 . chapter 4 Keep it coming! PLEASE? More more more! I'll check back every two seconds until the next chapter us up! *huffs and sits, staying put, mouse over the refresh button* |
 maruimochi 7/5/04 . chapter 4Uh...what just happened? Okay, I get the part where Shuichi broke up with Yuki (I would too if I were under the same circumstances) but I don't understand Yuki's behavior. I haven't seen the entire series yet so that could always affect it. Anyway, shouldn't Yuki be more depressed? Well, I guess he's showing signs in his own way so I guess there's isn't an isue. Guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
 clari chan 7/5/04 . chapter 4i love it. I understand that English is your second language. The mistakes arent major either so u shouldn't worry much because u tried ur best. I really like the story and the climax is building. please hurry with the next chapter :) |
 maruimochi 6/27/04 . chapter 3*Gasps* This is the best Gravitaion fic I have ever read! I mean it, seriously it is. So adorable! Shuichi seems to get cuter every second! Wow, is Eiri really that possesive? He does seem the typr though, doesn't he? Ah well, I loved the chapter adnI hope you update soon! |
 clari chan 6/21/04 . chapter 3really good. i love it. please continue soon |