Your story is very interseting. Please write some more.

Cool story.

NIce story this is. I just hope you update often. And are you going to make pairs for this story or it won't be any pairs?

pair haku with tenten. if your gonna do others later i suggest shika temari and neji ino never seen a fic with a neji ino in it. short chapter but it was good. cant wait for the update

Akk you cut it off too soon! Hurray and update soon please. This story is great, can't wait to read the next part.

The chapter was good. HOWEVER, I noticed an error. You got the Fourth's name wrong. It's "Yondaime". Thought you'd want to know. )

K, I have some things to say...

a) YOU READ AND REVIEWED MY STORY! APOCALYPSE!

b) YAY! 3rd chap is coolish.

c) NO ONE should be put with Ino... *shivers* I really don't think Haku needs a pairing. He's just cool by his own self.

d) Yes yes. Update more. YOU MUST UPDATE MORE.

Well... I think that's it... ja ne.

Hmm I don't know if I like the idea of the fourth still being alive, it really depends on how you're going to explain it later on.

For the rest it's a good chapter but really short / And I'm gonna be a mean nitpicker here but you forgot the Sixty-four hands :P

Update soon! :)

Oh and if you haven't read my fic yet, please do and tell me what you think.

I'm not the first to reply... darn. Yes, this is good. Don't be down on yourself. Oh, one more thing...

READ AND REVIEW MY STORY! U never did...

metanaito

Well ja ne again. *huggles*

this is real good and i was wondering is haku a boy or gurl in this fic?

nice fic

keep on the good work

update more soon!

...Interesting choice of demon/animal/things.

Let's see... Fox, Bear, Eagle, Dragon, and Shark... o.O Strange.

Ah, well. Interesting story, that's for sure.

great beginning not sure where youll go but i has great potential

Hmm kinda weird that Haku would be chained like that in Konoha but that kinda deals with that Mist devil dude I guess. (I hate him, bah)

I'll admit it's getting pretty interesting. So who's going to form a team? Hinata, Naruto and Haku? (one can only hope hehe) or maybe a demon team? (all 5 of em) :P

Well update soon I promise I'll reading from now on, promise.

Oh Haku/Ino pairing, Ino is always obsessed with girly stuff, and lets not forget Haku is sort of girlish himself eh? Ino thinking of him as the most cute thing in the world and work up his confidence? (she has tons) Ah well, just a few ideas.

UPdate soon!