Wow, this was surprisingly awesome!

loved it, loved it, LOVED it! :D

Seeing as this story is eight years old, I'm not sure you still even get the reviews, but I had to comment...

This -

"Sarah sent him the look-of-death that automatically came with two X chromosomes"

- was pure AWESOMENESS! Seriously, I'm loving your story. I am puzzled over how I missed it two years ago when I first began scouring labby fic. But, I suppose it makes it even more special now because it was an unexpected treat (and quite different from the rest of the lot out there, too!)

G-d knows why, but I like this story enough to favorite it. *rolls eyes* Your characters are spot on although there were several moments I want to see still. Like what is Gabriel up to? Aaron finding out he's kinda hitting on his ex-girlfriend's step-cousin. Jareth just marching up to the people in Sarah's life from the above world and announcing: Yes, I'm her husband. Jareth just straight forward saying to to Aaron - or anyone with a romantic inclination towards Sarah - that he's her husband. And then see her get all flustered/mad about it. I still want to see her go to college and try to make it work and to see her get more comfortable with her role as the Goblin Queen. Maybe establish some duties that would entail.

A good idea for a sequel would be a few months in the future, how everything is settling in, and then some sort of political upheaval in the Underground that demands more of her attention and maybe some intrigue in the Aboveground, like one of her classmates being a Fae. It would be strange. Perhaps it's a stereotype and I do expect better of you, *smirks* but if you turn it this way, and look into it just so, it can show you so much more. rewrite a stereotype. It's always a brilliant challenge.

Alice

This story is amazing! It was well written though you're later chapters have more errors than your beginning chapters - But you made up for it with such a captivating story. You're characters were well described, and I loved how you portrayed Jareth! Sarah was dead on perfect for her age. And all your OC's were brilliantly detailed. I liked how you kept everything flowing very nicely between the worlds and the plot was fantastic! I'm glad I finally read this wonderful piece. It was suggested as a good read on jdbfangirlharem, but... a good read is a bit of an understatement!

Kat

Yay! I really loved this story.

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Wonderful. Simply wonderful. That's all I can say.

Ahhhh! This was AWESOME! A completely different take than I've read before on the origins of Jareth. I loved your descriptive details. Your dialogue, especially as you got into the story, was well done and matched characterization. I can't wait to read more of your stories and hope you return to the Labrynth with other stories.

OMG

So amazing.

Thank you for a beautiful story, it's keeps me entertained up to this point. I'm hoping you'll have a nice ending. Ü

I just stayed up much later than I should have, despite the fact that I have plenty of things to do tomorrow, in order to finish this. I really enjoyed it - it's a fresh take on the Jareth/Sarah story and you've written it very well. I loved your own characters, particularly Callista and Gabriel, and despite being a little frustrated with the bratty Sarah of the first few chapters, I truly like the way you wrote her as it went on. It's nice to read a piece which doesn't compromise on the headstrong/dangerous/unpredictable aspects of the main characters. The refusal of betrothal scene, in particular, was gold.

Also, the use of Greek mythology was brilliant.

Thanks for a good read.

Louise.

Arghhhhh this is still my all time favorite labyrinth story/sequel I've ever read. A part of me wishes you'd pick up the story again- so much is left open-ended- and another part of me doesn't want to put someone so fantastic through the wringer of keeping up with another story long-term again, haha. But, if you ever did, I'd be there at every second reading it. Thanks again, and I hope you're well!

Very enjoyable, loved the humour and how you explored the Fae courts :)

This was a fantastic story! Jareth and Sarah felt believable, as did all of the other characters. The plot was strong and I found myself unable to put it down or walk away (its 5.30am as I write this). Fantastic job!