The artistry of the language of this story never ceases to amaze me. Bravo once again! I hope you are continuing to write and develop this amazing talent that you have wherever you are.

This. Was. Brilliant. Totally different than any Labyrinth story I've yet read, this was wonderful. Brava.

(Re-)reading, and liking! Off to bed now.

I really have quite a fondness for this genre but I would like to say that your stories, especially this one, have gone beyond fondness into the realm of almost worship.
Everything from the characterization down to the labyrinthine plot, with its many twists and turns, reveals that you are a fantastic writer. Whatever you write after this I will read just based on this fact.
I don't comment often, for which I am eternally saddened by my laziness, but you my dear were worth every keystroke.
Farewell and good luck in whatever you do!

An interesting tale. Very well written.

“No, she wouldn't. She would scream and then [...] and I'd later kill myself from remorse.”
"He said, if you steal his robe again he'll put all your clothes in the bog and you'll have to go naked and that was a good idea and maybe he'd do it anyways and he'd see you later and don't trip or throw up and say hello to Jeremy and never mind he'd do it himself. And that's the end.”
Oh my goodness I laughed so much...

I find your fic to have given a significant contribution to Labyrinth fandom and have added it to my archive, Labyrinth Classics.

If you have any suggestions for fics that are not on the list but you consider to be Labyrinth classics give me a ring.

Personal note:

Your fic has perhaps the best Professor!Jareth in the history of fandom, and maybe even the confession of love. Not to mention the whole thing just rocks!

I really enjoyed this fic. It is one of the best I have read, I only lament the fact that it ended. But thank you for writing it and sharing. It was a treat to read.

I really enjoyed this. The interaction between Sarah and Jareth was perfectly charming.

It 's such a broad wish . . . but it 's interesting.
Thank you for the chapter.

Great conclusion! I really, really enjoyed this story. I'd have to say it's one of the better Labyrinth fics I've read. A unique resolution to Jareth and Sarah's relationship, too. There's definitely more room for development there.

I'm also intrigued to read more about Gabriel and any plots he may or may not have. One of the marks of an excellent fanfiction, in my opinion, is memorable OCs. It's especially essential for a fandom like Labyrinth where the source material essentially only develops two characters (five if you count Hoggle, Ludo and Sir Didymus). The Dara family, and even Sarah's Aboveground friends, feel real enough to have come from the movie itself. They fit in perfectly with the world you crafted, and make a lasting impression without ever upstaging Jareth or Sarah. I think I've grown rather attached.

This may have been finished three years ago, and you may not have written anything since, but just know that there's still people out there stumbling across your work who would jump if you ever came back to fanfiction. I have no idea what your major is (did you ever mention it?), but don't ever give up writing! You've got talent~

Your most humorous chapter in the story, and a great break from all the angst. I couldn't stop laughing at the suitor descriptions. It was a well-timed comedic interlude.

Oh, you made up for everything was disappointed with in chapter six in the dining room scene. It works much better now. THAT is a good cause to be frightened-- not that Sara would have quite understood the magnitude of the threat earlier. Great speech by Jareth, and very much in keeping with the spirit of the Labyrinth. I like that Sara's handling it a bit less dramatically, too (though I suspect she may now be in denial). I guess I'm just not a big fan of tears.

To the next chapter!

Yikes.

I know this chapter was probably posted a really long time ago, and it's kind of a little late to change things, but I really feel I need to air my misgivings. Why in the world is Sarah crying at the end of the chapter? That's just a little overmuch. So her step-grandmother is making designs on her future...I'm pretty sure the Sarah that conquered the Labyrinth would have a little more confidence in her ability to sidestep any unwanted engagements. Being upset is understandable, but I just thought that Sarah would be a little stronger than to actually break down and cry. If the Labyrinth taught her ANYTHING, it should have been to keep a level head in the face of adversity.

Oh man!! I've read this fic two or three times and I love it every single time. Your development of the characters is stunningly designed, the descriptions of anything from scenery, to clothing, to the emotions of Sarah, to the expressions of Jareth should make any professional author envious. I adore the vocabulary you incorporate, it enriches the text and quality of the story, and the construction of the plot from start to finish is complex and believable. Congratulations for writing a such an impressive and beautiful story, I hope you continue to make the most of this incredible talent and write your own stories to share with others!!