Man, am I going to have to pay rent AGAIN! ;.; Living in a box is more trouble than its worth. Anyway, thanks for writing a chappie about Fuu, even if it was about her being raped. o.O Great story, keep on writing! Lylas!

Krissie

Why? WHY? I'll tell you why! ...yeah, ok, I got no idea. But I have before! I just forget why. Something to do with a snowball fight, though.

Good ending. *nod*

I got an idea. If you ever want to continue this, why not do a chapter on bullying? It's a serious issue that's gotten worse in the past few years, and I know an awesome poem you could put at the end, and the writer probably won't mind. You could use...let's see...Fuu, Ascot, orZazu. Or any other character that seems a likely target.

On a random note...MONKIES ATE MY BRAINZ! D

Wow . . . this is a story that I'm sure hits home with a lot of people. Just out of curiousity, are you going to write a chapter on Fuu, too? I'd be interested to see where you could take that. Anyway, this is a really powerful fic. Very, very well-written and seriously makes you sympathize with the characters. Keep up the great work, Rach!

Krissie

I found the Rent CD at Best Buy! 2-Disc set for thirty-three bucks! So I have to wait to get it...

And as FYI, ice can cut you. I've been cut by ice a lot. Intentionally and unintentionally.

Good second chap - I didn't cry, but I'm kinda pissed and very zoned so yeah.

I'll talk to you later - gotta rant about the admins again. It's in the bio.

hihi! interestin fic...) it's a fresh idea. and i liked the poem i'm eager to see how u wud continue it. _ *sees reviews* i'm alright with the idea of puttin clef in. hehz...P anywayz, pls update soon! -

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! DUN ADD CLEF! I will sick Cerby and Legs on you if you add Clef!

Sorry - had to get that out. Sea Misstress has me scared now. Ebil Clef lover...

Story in one word: SAD. If you ever get the inspiration, this probably would make a good mini-series. So the other chica was right there. BUT WRONG ON CLEF! Clef sucks! Which you know all too well, but I must still say it. D

And on a completely unrelated subject: GET ON TONIGHT! I MISS MI HERMANA Y I NEED TO TALK TO HER! Ok? Ok! Habagada!

Good start! Although it seemed at the end it became rushed and hard to follow.

But it has potential for a great story, please update soon! :D

*whispers* and if you could add Clef too you'd make me really happy :b