Angsty Peter.

wow.thats sad.AND I WAS IN HAPPY LAND TO!NOW I GOT TO LISTEN TO DEPRESSING SONGS!thanks,thanks alot.I HATE U!

M good! You should be writing more about Peter Pan. Or perhaps a similar treatise of Hook's character. Maybe both together XD
Hope to see more of this universe from you.

this story rocks!
keep up the good work. the perspective is awesome, can you just imagine the things Peter has to say? he's been the main character of a story for YEARS and yet he is always left in the back round while some girl takes HIS spot light... its sad really... anyway i'll stop before i start rambling...i've already started havent I?
chao
~kira~

Interesting insight. Like it!

*sniffle* Very good.

That was just lovely. It's not everyone who can take a radical idea and still stay so close in character. I truly enjoyed how you combined elements from the book as well as the various movies. While I don't personally hold this view, thank you for this new persective.

This story was deep...very deeper. In fact, I think this the deepest a fanfiction writer has gone into Peter Pan's psyche. I like that. However, it could have been a bit longer, as well as some foresight as to why Hook joined the pirates.

-gasp- This was so sad. I just wished I could cuddle him up and try my best to comfort him. But alas, he is just a story.-sob- Anyway, I loved how you wrote this. Great work!

It would be great if you wrote this as a full story. I'd read it!

::tear:: Poor Peter! I liked reading it very much!

Wow. That was...deep. Really deep.