oh my god! this is realy funny so far!
“Bakura, can't you keep your sadistic lovemaking quiet? Some of us are tired!” Malik accused, eying the distasteful scene of his cousin's supposed lover trying to choke him.

“Fool! She is not my mistress; she is my assassin!” Bakura choked out in obvious

That was so funy!

i really like this. i am reading the sequal soon. its was awsome.

Wow. Such a beautiful story. :( I'm crying...it's so sad that it's already ended. Just kidding. :) I can't wait to start the sequel. :)

For some reason, I hate Bakura in this chapter. Sometimes, I wish he would just leave and let Anzu live happily ever after with Yuugi...but this is Bakura X Anzu...so I guess I have no such luck. :( Just kidding. :) Even though I did, at one point, wish Bakura would just drop dead, Bakura is still one of my favorite characters. His personality has so many dimensions that each author can spin and layer to their content without anyone's objection since Bakura is such a mystery to start with. :)

HAH! I KNEW IT! :)

OMFG! Is that who I think it is...

Under normal circumstances, I would be angry that the two didn't meet...but seeing as you're the author, the circumstances aren't normal. :) I am in love with this past chapter.

I can't wait to see the sparks fly when Bakura and Anzu meet up again. :)

Poor Anzu...I feel so sad for her. Of course, that's probably on account of your writing, as oppose to me actually feeling sad for her. If someone that lacked your writing skills had written this, I doubt I would feel nearly as sympathetic. Keep up the great work! :)

I love this story. :)

Well, I read to Chapter 16, was about to review, when I thought that you deserved more than one review. So...here I am, reviewing for every single chapter. :) Your writing is wonderful. I can't believe it's captured my attention for the past two hours. Or that I haven't become completely bored. I usually never get to Chapter 16 of most stories. I guess this one is just different.

This sounds strangely similar to Cowboy Bebop...except with Anzu as the bounty hunter. Nevertheless, I am prepared to be amazed as I read on. Your writing sounds interesting already, and it's only the first chapter. I can't wait to continue this story. :)

that was funny XD i really love Chisara. This is getting exciting, I'll make sure to review most of the chapters. ^^

that's new ^^; it's really good, i like the new setting and describing Anuz and the ship. It's cool.

*Starts doing DRAGNET theme* Everything is about to hit the fan! {Ducks for cover} In the words of Team Rocket, PREPARE FOR TROUBLE AND MAKE IT DOUBLE! That is exactly what is about to happen: DOUBLE TROUBLE!