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erkxserra rule
2004-12-28 . chapter 1
aww thats so sad.i liked it.u should write more
Sharyn
2004-12-07 . chapter 1
Peculiar. Very peculiar.

I liked "I wanted to cry, needed to cry"

I don't really have any other comments other than I found that most peculiar.
flamefirefox
2004-09-25 . chapter 1
=_= 1:30 am.. I'm reading.. hm... anyway XD lol .. haha.. yeah.. found this... =3 tis interesting... erm.. never did make Raven support Rebecca.. what do they talk about...? ... eh well... kinda wonder what Nino and Rebecca talk about too... ack.. me must go sleep now.. erg.. see ya laters.. sorry for the late review oO;; .. I'm odd..
Coffinspire
2004-08-17 . chapter 1
As I see in a few other the other reviews, I'm also suprised I actually read shoujo-ai o.o; But, still, this was really sad, and you did a great job at writing it ;-; =starts crying=
Amethyst Dust
2004-07-06 . chapter 1
I can't belive I just read shojo ai...What is the world coming to??and no i'm not flamming i'm here to say I really liked the story!!Good job!
Yami no Kirbie
2004-07-02 . chapter 1
Whoa. I just read shoujo-ai. -blinkblink-

...

-starts jumping up and down frantically- I love it! I never considered the possibility of Nino going with anyone other than Jaffar, really, and definitely not Rebecca, but it was good. -nods- Very good.

For some weird reason, I found the Lyn/Nino parts good, better than the Rebecca/Nino, but it's all good in the end. (which is weird because my one true pairing is Hector/Lyn...) ^_~ Rath/Wil was nice too. And the Raven/Lucius-ness, even if there was Priscilla. Nice.

Lovely fic. Write more please!
Philip
2004-06-15 . chapter 1
Yes... Perfect! *Goes into idiotic yuri fanboy mode* YAY! So, good, yet so subtleyny like...(Is subtleyny a word?) Well, good... Now, I gues I owe you the female Erk sprites...
Rockies
2004-06-12 . chapter 1
So sad, so beautiful! ;_; Not a couple I'd really think of, but you made it work. I like the Lucius/Raven/Priscilla and Rath/Wil bits >:)
Sara Jaye
2004-06-11 . chapter 1
Wow...y'know, LynxFlorina's always been the only definite shoujo ai couple I can see in Fire Emblem. XD; I've toyed with the idea of SerraxPriscilla like, once, but it didn't stick. Priscilla is too obsessed with Raven, and Serra...she's SERRA. XD

But this...this was really interesting. By not making their relationship a blatant romance you made something totally non-canon work well...the bit with Rath and Wil was a little odd, but interesting. And I liked the image of Raven holding both Priscilla and Lucius.
R Amythest
2004-06-11 . chapter 1
Aww.,. it's a bit too long for an enjoyable descriptive short fic, I think, but it was lovely and .,. .,. well, emotional. Yeah, it was kinda weird.,. but it was cute, too.
Melfice
2004-06-11 . chapter 1
I...can't believe I just read shoujo-ai. My world is collapsing down around me. I also never would've considered RebeccaxNino--OR LynxNino--but this is good :) Rath comforting Wil...so spiffy. Very nice, very sad.
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