is there a full story to go with this one shot?

wow. I love well written HHr stories. I enjoyed yours tremendously

Ah, Dark Love at it's best. Check up on cloneserpent's "Scream" series, lovely, absolutely lovely. Although there is far to little Ron/Dumbles bashing in most fics, Lupin as well. And Snape, lets not forget Snape. Oh, so many victims, so little time...

Deliciously nasty. I've always felt that in canon Harry was denied any justice at all (the Dursley's abuse, Dumbledore's knowing complicity in that abuse as a means of brainwashing Harry to a servile and meek personality, and the Ministry's attacks - especially Umbridge's tortures) so I enjoy stories where he extracts that justice himself. Even better that it's Harry and Hermione paired. Adding this one to my favs.

Wonderful story. I wish there were more of these types of stories. Would you be planning to write a multi-chapter dark!HHr or is this the limit of the foray?

Oh my god. I loved it. I've never really seen a dark!Hermione and dark!Harry done so well and this just made me smirk in glee. Honestly, it was so well written and if you ever get around to it I'd love to see another one-short or even multi-chapter fiction with a Dark!H/Hr.

evil, sick, twisted, and cruel... all in all i loved it
umbridge got exactly what was coming to her

-laughs- inventively cruel indeed! i love it! is this just a one shot, or are there more of these delightful little things lurking about?? :D

Is this a one-shot, or something more?

::giggles:: very entertaining. well done

Very interesting, are you going to continue this?

Kinda mixed on this. Not sure if I like H/Hr dark, but when it comes to Umbridge it works very well. I do love the way you have Hermione defending Harry's caricature in such a deceitful way - giving Umbridge her just desserts. For Umbridge it was long overdo.

i LOVED it u need to write more where harry and hermione are dark its very sexy!

Nice, very nice.

Twisted - just like the story
I like that
dave