How dare you leave me hanging like that! you're as heartless as Davy Jones!lol

This is a great story when the next chapter coming?

Guys, this story is fan-TAS-tic. You've got the characters so pegged. Na, the conversation Elizabeth has with her father is brilliant, and Joey, were you Jack Sparrow in another life or what!? I LOVE the bit about the hat.
Keep it up guys!

Oh! Please finish this story! It's mui bueno! HEHEE!

Okay, I'll admit it- I was a bit disappointed that we didn'T learn anything more about Elizabeth. But the Jack characterization makes up for it. Jack and Gillette are both in character and I really want to know more about the guy with the scar. BTw, I seem to get the feeling that you like cliff-hangars... Anyway, two thumbs up and please, *please* update soon...

Okay, I'll admit it- I rarely review. Never seem to have the time. But your fic- with it's so little reviews makes me want to review. Why? Because this *chapter* is a lot better than a lot of fics with hundreds of reviews. You've got Elizabeth to a 't', Governor Swan IC and it makes sense. And of course you left a cliff-hangar ending. So great jobs and I can't fathom why hardly anyone's reviewed...

oh - youve got me hooked!! you have jacks character PERFECT! *squees* cant wait until the next chappie ~ youre an extremely talented writer keep up the good work!!

OK NOW IM REALLY REALLY HOOKED! YOU MUST KEEP GOING!! UPDATE FAST! AS IN...NOW!

Oh, now is that awesome or is that awesome!
Suspense...whoa
Who is this other pirate? And how...and why..and..
oh dang, lots of unanswered questions.
Very good job, Joey.
Both you and Nadia know how to portray the characters well. Just as good as the movie.
Now I've got to go watch it. I hope the DVD player's working now..
Is it Nadia's turn next? I gotta know who to bug to update.
It's so exciting!
~Reda~

oh cliffie! I really like this story, you have an original plot and its well written-plus you have jack's character almost exactly right, which i almost never see in potc fics. elizabeths pregnant, isn't she? and whats going on with jack and this unknown pirate? i want to know, update soon!

...
whoa
I like it! Yall are awesome! Are you two going to take turns writing the chapters, and if that is how yall are doing it, who wrote the first chapter?
It was good, I'm excited, and now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the update.
I hate waiting.
Rawr.
I like the way you portrayed Elizabeth, almost perfectly, exactly right as far as I know. I just hope there's more of Will soon 'cause he's the best person to picture...Orlando Bloom *sigh*
oh my bad
well
guess I'm stuck waiting, aren't I?
no fair I hate waiting...
like I said before
Ok
I've blabbered enough
Update soon, you guys!
~Reda~

OMEGOSH! YOU MUST CONTINUE WITH TIS FIC!! I love it so far! You have the characters perfectly intact as well! hhm...just a thought..ELIZABETHS PREGNANT ISN'T SHE?!?!?!? Sorry, just a small question i had to get off my chest. Tis a very intersting story and you REALLY REALLY REALLY have to continue.

Oh I love it!I thought it was great!Are you going to make it longer?I hope you do because I thought it was great.I loved it!Keep up the good work.Hope you read mine.
-Nikki

so far so good : im a will/elizabeth fan and im a sucker for all the romantics!! thank you its fabulous so far - cant wait for the next chappie