That was beautiful. I don't know how to explain it, but the picture you created is so beautiful. Wow. This was really powerful.

Goodness, have I told you how much I LOVE and adore and admire your writing?

You write out flowing poetry, spin and weave webs of pictures. Seriously, it's like you're the goddess of similies, poetry, and literature. I know I'm putting you on a pedestal and it might annoy you or you might not deem yourself worthy, but you are, you just ARE.

Your portrayal of poor, poor Adelaide and our own reclusive, bitter Severus left my eyes stinging almost. I WANTED to cry but it's the type of story that doesn't let you cry, it just lets you gawk at the beauty of those words. You ALWAYS have me gawking and ogling at the beauty of each letter, each word, each sentence you spin and you weave.

And the interaction, the bloody interaction between them was so rea, so raw, so bitter and BEAUTIFUL. I wanted to DIE when he apologized to her at the end and just left there all broken and unsure of what to do.

I just hope that you continue to use this talent of yours and to perfect it so that it's even better than it is now.

I'm impressed, beyond it. Amazed and impressed and shocked and all those other wonderful things . . . by your work. All by your work.

Good day to you.

- TerrisMoon

Let me start this review out by stating that I am not a Harry Potter fan. I may have been at some point, but my interest faded as I aged and, though I hate to admit it, there's something about the popularity of the series that I dislike.
I do, however, love your work, and as such decided to hazard through despite my trepidation.
I love this one too. Big surprise there, hm?
Snape is very perfectly displayed, as is that longing-on-the-verge-of-obsession that Adelaide shows the instant her thoughts begin to wind out. This reminded me very sincerely of a friend who has been in love with a rather troublesome male for sometime and is reluctant to tell him, incapable of telling him.
I'll gladly wait around for new stories or updated oldies of yours, though I am not certain you are still haunting the halls of Until then I'll amuse and inspire myself with what you've archived here.
-Ourania

It's pretty old, made about...uh...four months ago? No reviews? I love Snape, he's my favorite character, and this is good, so good...