*shivers* I'm sure glad I don't live in Britian(I live in the US)! I love your story but you're giving me nightmares! If I was sane I'd tell you to stop but I'm not so keep writing!

Sadie

me: OO oh my god! this is the coolest story in the world! i love it so much! poor Yuugi! *cries*

Damion: Oo Bakura cut Yuugi's finger off? Wow...didn't see that coming. Quiet the little twist. And Bakura's Yuugi's uncle! That's a good twist too.

Me: UPDATE REALLY SOON! GAH!

Masami

Yes you are mean! But no worries, it's all ok with me. Wow... very morbid and bloody. I could almost see and smell the blood dripping from Yugi's finger. /shudder/ poor lil thing... Please update soon!

HOLY POO! Oh, Bakura's in for it now! I can't wait for the next chapter! I just know it's going to be good! I LOVE this story. 100/10!

me: interesting story. Thogh poor yugi. I feel so sorry for him.

Tira: He's a follower of Set, no surprise that he feels no remorse for hurting his own nephew. with all the horrible acts Bakura's done he's better off just killing a cat.

Yugi and Yami walk into the room

Yugi: you too are reading fan fiction again!

I look at him surprized. me: What's wrong with that most of these r pritty well written.

Yami: ohh really let me have a look.

Tira remebers what happens in the story. Tira: I would advise against you reading this particular one Yami.

Yami: why? it's just a story right.

Yugi: besides how bad can it be?

Me: Alright if u 2 insist. I go back to the first chapter. then Tira and i Leave the room.

Tira: Hey tenshi want to go get some ice cream. I don't wan't do be here when Yami and yugi find out what it's about.

Me: I'll take you up on that offer but your buying.

Tira: Anything to get out of here.

This was an excellent first chapter! I really like this! Check out my profile if you can, I'm working on a yu-gi-oh story too! Cuddles, -Dhani

-Cringes again- The Part where Yugi was getting tortured, holy crap that made me cringe so much. You did very good with the torturing part.

Poor Yami, but he now knows where Yugis is! Can't wait for the next chappie, this one was very good and I don't mind at all for the long wait.

See ya latas for now and good luckilies!

OMG Please update soon you've hooked me! Yes I don't always enjoy seeing Sweet Adorable Yugi getting tortured, so I need to see if he gets salvation or if he just gets screwed over. So please don't leave me hangin too long.

Hurry! please update soon, this is a really good story and Ive been waiting for AGES for you to continue *sigh*

*Gasp* Oh no, what did bakura do to lil Yugi? Lol, in the beginning I thought I was missing something when the setting suddenly switched from the previous chappy but then I got the idea, very clever of you. Aw, Mana and Yami were together? I've never really considered that pairing before, maybe it's because she seems so much younger than he his, then again, Mahaado's older than both of them and there are lots of stories which feature that pairing. Anyways, awesome as always, update when you can!

Cool, really like this fic. Poor Yugi. yami get off your backside and save him. (Reviewer stamps foot and points at said Pharaoh and then the door). Update soon

It;s ok that you waited to so long, it happens to everyone, but this chappter was very awesome! Poor Yugi ;-; He got so hurt, it's kind of sad, I hope he's ok! Glad that Yami is ok... I loved this chapter it was really good, I'm looking forward to more here soon so see ya latas for now and good luckilies! -

Kameeko: please update soon...

Kamoray: ...it's a great story...we hope you haven't decided to stop writing...

I love this story so much! I've read it three time already! Please update soon. I want to know what happens, lol. You have awesome stories and I love your writing style. I was surprised when you said this was your first YGO fic. It's really awesome and I highly encourage you to update as soon as you can. Just don't kill Yugi,please, he's my favorite character. _ *glomps Yugi* He's so adorable!

I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT