What an inprovement much darker the your first one it's truly refreshing to see some darker fics every once and a while. I love the fact you have Rei doing everything she kind to protect Sailor moon. It's so different then what you usauly see like Usagi being super powerful and giving the Senshi new henshi. All though if it's done right Usagi being a bit more rounded to say the least is nice. Oh I really love that part where Rei throws off her gloves just not to get blood on Usagi it's so dramatic and really adds to the story. Man what a story can't wait for the rest well see ya!
Saris Yui

Omg why haven't you updated soon? This fanfic is so good, you need to update!! It's even better than the original!!

hey the rewritten version is great so far with great detail and a lot more saddness mixed in to it hope to see more in the future exspecially what is going to happen to use and rei ja ne

So what's next!? POst soon! Keep up the good work! ^o^

Hi, I do hope you keep on writing. I have enjoyed your story and I hope to read more.

i'm not sure I get the drift here...is this a future chapter or something? sounds good, though. really vivid and powerful scenes.

Cool please up date asap! I can't decide which one is better!

Once again, a wonderful masterpiece! I really enjoyed that chapter!! Can't wait till there's more!!

hey love your story really hope to see more soon

ja

bunny-chan

...what can I say that hasn't allready been said no? Hahaha, nice, very nice, as usual
T-chan... ok that sounds weird comin from me. Neways, sequal sounds great, I might read that one, currently going though your fics and reading what I havn't... again, t'is great

w00t,
The omnipowerful, omnipotent, omniscient
Vanslaz the Awesomesserest ((boo yah *does a jig*))

Awsome! loved it!! even better than the first time writin , if thats possible.

Never fear! I will no hit on you, I don't swing that way. You have a done an excellent job rewritting this so far. Very vivid and clear. Do keep up the good work and update as soon as possible.

rei is wufei's wife?

Aww, I don't think Usagi was that OoC. nn Bright and cute and innocent, as always. xD The bit with Rei was kind of intense and dark --I'm sure that was what you intended it to be, though. xD

I really like this style of writing. It's different from other pieces in a way I can't seem to place my fingers on --but I know I like it. nn

So, anyway, I'll be looking forward to another chapter~

Another good chapter. I liked Usagi is the beginning, she's very bright and cheerful. I hope Rei gets ahold of herself, she needs to protect her princess. And I hope Usagi remembers, Rei will not be able to bear it.. although she will have a kawaii husband to look after her. :3