Reviews for Primus: Fortitude

Reviews For: Primus: Fortitude

Hikagi 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abuseI have found you, and am in awe. proceeds to read through as much fiction as can be processed and understood
AnExiledFrank 2006-12-28 ch 1,	abuseI think what first captivated me with this story was that it was about the seven virtues, something that people seem to forget about when they mention the seven sins. Egads, does no one get a good Christian education anymore? XD Anyway, what struck me was how right the characters sounded. Just another day in the office, at least for some, and that perhaps prove more than anything about her virtue? It's always there, not just at specific points, unlike a sin, that one has to "give into" in order to be considered sinful. I agree that it might seem sort of weird to have Hawkeye be part of the virtue Fortitude, and yet, she is strong, relying on her own ability, unlike the alchemists that get to rely on their alchemy to get them through their days, she has to rely on her own self, picking up the pieces when they fall apart in front of her (aka, Colonel Mustang being an idiot). Er, question of the timeline? Also perhaps a description of what each of the virtues means as sort of beginning (not that I don't like the quote from Confucius) to know what we might be getting ourselves into, sort of. ^^ Lovely, lovely.
Psycho King 2005-01-31 ch 1,	abuseVery cool... I'm going to read your second vertues story in just a second...
Hosaki 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseWow! I really like this- it's a great idea! It sort of summarizes the series- the Heavenly Virtues battling against the Deadly Sins. Really cool idea! Keep them coming, please!
2004-11-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood job. You've captured Hawkeye well... along with all the other characters. (I really love the way you write everyone) The series is a neat idea - and I don't care if you thought Hawkeye was an odd choice; now that you've written it, it seems like the most logical thing. Good job.
Handsome Puppy 2004-06-18 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! Mustang sure knows his second well to thank her like that. Very interesting idea of writing the Seven Virtues. I would probably choose faith for Hawkeye, but fortitude fits her just fine. I await your other six!
Bronwen Stx 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseWow. I'm continuously impressed with your ideas. The fact that indication of your thoughtfullness in this shot is present raises my respect for you. And the quotes! Lovely pretty quotes! Confucius too! You are so off to my favourites.
Kageling 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseIncredible idea!! I'd love to see this continue. I'm sure you'll do a great job covering this. Enjoy writing it as much as I'll enjoy reading it!
Lauryn 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseGood~! I'm a sucker for Roy/Riza interaction... even if it's only a little bit.
alessandriana 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abusegrin As always, I love your work! Nice insight into Hawkeye's mind and the relationship between her and Roy-- that's always interesting territory to step into. And your writing quality, as always, is top notch, and I can find nothing to nitpick. ;) And I like the fact that you're doing something with the Seven Virtues, as well; at one point I had thought (very very vaguely) about doing something with them, and contrasting them with the Sins in some way, but no plot came to mind so I gave it up. It's nice to see someone else doing something with them, and I'll be interested to see who you've chosen for the other six. Hawkeye's not who I would have picked on my own for Fortitude, but she fits just as well and probably better than my choice . ;P Anyways, I can't wait to see more~!
Stardancer1 2004-06-11 ch 1,	abuseGood story, Hawkeye would certianly not take to being laid up with just time on her hands. And besides how else could she annoy the Colonel? Good story and lucky Becky
Akishira 2004-06-11 ch 1,	abuseNice fic, I liked it. Just a little thing; in the Riza-Roy interaction, Hughes is called a Lieutenant Colonel, but another 'Hughes' pops up in the office interaction as a 'Major'. Is that Fury or the LC? Might want to fix that...
Aroe 2004-06-11 ch 1,	abuseOoh,very nice ^_^.Quite stupidly,I commented on LJ too(niwakaame).You grasped her personnality pretty well,manga personnality,maybe a bit 'over-dry'? Hm,I meant that within the Hawkeye/Mustang relationship there is a slight area that isn't quite as hmm.'serious'-which coudl be illustrated by when mustang was about to fight Scar.however,very nice job.

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