Oh I love this D I miss Doyle so much and there are almost NO rewrite fics out there for him!

I get that this is a ten year old fic, but ten years ago I was four and not into anything except Sesame Street ) So I'm catching up now.

Love this story so much! And I get that you're probably not gonna post a next one, but it wouldn't hurt to ask! ;)

So is this lovely fic gonna get a sequal?

Brilliant! Can you write more of these stories please!

A great story. Very good.

please! I must have more! this is the way the show should have gone. *grumbles about evil Joss*

*chuckle* marvellous

Loved it!

Oh my god! This was great! I LOVED IT! And I can't wait to see what's in store for our fearless foursome as they help the hopeless in LA! Plus... there was DOYLE! :)

Great! I loved it, is there going to be more?

That was one thousand times better than the actual episode. I give you two enthusiastic thumbs up! Keep up the good work.

Excellent story...if only if would give Joss some inspiration. *sigh* Oh well, you do a fine job here!

Wow:o) That was incredible. In times like these I really wish I knew more English words for "awesome" :o) Anyways your story was wonderful. In fact I'd rather see it on TV than the original version of the Parting Gift

Once again a brilliant story. Hope to see more of your work soon:o) Wit Doule in it, of course:o)

Magda

wow that was so cool. you managed to include doyle in the story line really well. this is way better then the actuall episode i would say due to the whole doyle still being alive thing. write more fics quickly cause i want to read them i like your writing. it doesn't get all confusing and even though i've already seen the proper episode to this i didn't get bored reading it.

I absolutly loved it! More, more!

cool