Reviews for Innocence Found

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guitarbabe2005 2008-03-16 ch 12,	abusehm not hte endin i thought but well written...
Claire C. Griffon 2005-01-03 ch 12,	abuseaww. thats a great ending
Anyanka0705 2004-11-11 ch 12,	abuseI thought the story was really well done. I didn't really like the ending. The whole part with Angel and Spike was too dry for me. Needed some spicing up. AJ
samson 2004-08-20 ch 12, anon.	abuselovely, so sweet. the story left me one big sappy mess!
KeepTheFaith 2004-07-30 ch 12,	abuseI loved the way you ended this story, with Buffy and Spike coming full circle to resolve things with Angel once and for all. The bike ride on the way to L.A. was both cute, bantery and erotic, with such a sweet, light touch. I liked Angel and Spike's conversation, although it was more than a bit painful for them both, but that's what made it catharctic for both of them, I think. I also liked playful, childlike - in an adult way - Buffy and Spike at the end. Excellent story from start to finish. Truly - one of the best Spuffy tales I've ever read and I read a lot. You should submit it to some of the Spuffy fic sites for archiving, if you haven't already. Your dialogue is dead on to the characters and your desciptions are wonderfully vivid.
Ms Trick 2004-07-29 ch 12,	abusewell...the spike/angel kiss came out of nowhere but i think the story ended really well. great write! trick
Mizgeorgiapeach 2004-07-26 ch 12,	abuseIs there more to this story or is it over? I was really really really enjoying it and I really hope you continue. I check for a new chapter every day!
star2421 2004-07-22 ch 12,	abuseGreat chapter, post soon.
ladymiss 2004-07-20 ch 12,	abuseThat can't be the end, is it the end? No, its not possibly the end. Update soon, please, Lady
Miriya 2004-07-20 ch 1,	abuseThat was a lovely story. Will there be a sequal, because I don't think Willow and Zander will just accept Spike and Buffy being together. I wouldn't put it past Zander to attempt to stake Spike in his sleep.
Mita427 2004-07-20 ch 12,	abuseKeep it up! Awesome stuff you got here! Mita
iluvglorfindel 2004-07-20 ch 12,	abuseAdd more soon!
Tobert 2004-07-16 ch 11,	abuseEXCELLENT chapter. people are finally starting to communicate with each other. I hope they take care of will;s little control problem. And I cant wait to see what happens between buffy and spike. keep up the great work adn update ASAP.
KeepTheFaith 2004-07-16 ch 11,	abuseI really loved this chapter. Great job having Buffy spill her feelings by talking about her bitty alter-ego's feelings for small or big Spike. I really liked the way you captured Buffy's inability to talk about her feelings or express them well, it was very in character. It was also good to finally see her admit she did care and wanted to see where things between them might go. Giles worries about Spike's missing chip seem pretty misplaced, especially since Buffy already knew about it, but it was nice to see him all fatherly with the protective instinct. I was hoping for more from Xander, but you've got him acting pretty much in character too. I liked the way he said he'd say no more about the Spike issue once he spoke his piece though. His worry about Willow seems pretty appropriate as well. I'm looking forward to the next part, especially since things seem to be going so well for Buffy and Spike.
Screeching Dragon 2004-07-16 ch 11,	abuseSurperb! That was cute, and a better move than I think Buffy would ever be able to figure out in her entire life. What will Angel think?

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