Oh,it's wonderful.Don't end it like this.Please continue.Thanks

come on dude update!

Ah! You can't put this on hold! :-D Please, please continue. Very nice characterization. Congrats on your first fanfic, even if I am a little late to the party. :-D

I hope you update soon.

Good chap!

This is TERRIFIC so far!! Woah- you're writing just blows me away! When I was your age (though it wasn't THAT long ago ;) I didn't know what half of those words meant let alone how to string them together so beautifully.
I'm very anxious to read more of this and find out if Jack freakin' catches on!! Lol. Great job so far. :) :) :)
P.S- thanks for writing a review to my story- I never considered the points you brought up, but they're very valid.

AWESOME! I love how Jack doesn't get it...wants it to be for him...but doesn't hope too much! Keep up the good writing!

Great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

I really like this. It's intriguing. Jack is so dense.. I can't wait for more. :)

good start, more please. hope the ankle gets better soon

Gah! I love Jack, but he can definitely miss the point sometimes...
"...and I'm certain he'll understand why you want to report to the Pentagon instead of to me."
C'mon, Jack! Not reporting to you means...!!
Nice characterization on both of them.

Very good fic! And you are quite a good author, especially for your first attempt! Can't wait for the next chapter. Want to hear Sam telling Jack *why* she is resigning from the Air Force.

nice story u got here! i look fwd to more!

-js

ps. stupid stupid jack ;-)

You must be joking. You are ending it THERE?! OMG! Ok...I see that you are continuing...you are forgiven. Keep it up!-Loo

OK, I'm waiting... still waiting... There is more right? There must be more! This is very good, I read your words and I can see them - excellent characterisations.