This is really amazing! I can definatly see how you could just leave it like this, but I would love to see what else you come up with. Its great to read, your writing quality is really good, and I really enjoyed it! Thank you sooo much!

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I love your work! Please, continue!

P.S. Don't kill Achilles in the end, please!

Your writing is simply exquisite. It's so easy to get lost in it and to feel the characters' emotions. I love A/B and I really like this. You write them so well, particularly Briseis. I really do hope someday you come back to update all your stories, you're one of my favourite writers in here!

Ohmigosh Im not going to lie, this is so good so far!

I'm going to keep reading!

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this is really great!

I'm loving it! I live for AB fanfics - please update soon!

I love this story. It takes the script from the movie and adds to it in the narrative. Please update soon!

I finally got around to catching up on this, and I am still impressed. Aside from a few random grammatical errors and typos (We all make them, though), it was basically flawless. I don't really think I liked this last chapter, but I think it has something to do with how, I don't know, forced Briseis inner dialogue was here. At least, that's how I'm interpreting it.

Are we going to be graced with another part anytime soon? Or ever?

Best Briseis-Achilles fanfic I've read by far... and I've read far too many looking for one that I like. I like this one. You did a great job working with the Troy script without relying on it completely- your words and descriptions enhanced the lines without changing them, and without losing sight of the subtler meanings of the dialogue. Excellent job- keep writing!

OrliNkeira: such a wonderful story! I loved the way you described Briseis inner conflict about her feelings for Achilles and his POV as well! Great job! I yhink you wrote a very passionate story and i love these kind of stories, Please update soon ok? Im dying to know what happens next to this wonderful couple.

hey, this is a really good story, i hope you review soon

i love ur story. i just read all of and i am waiting for an update it wuz very good. update soon please

hey.

I really like this. You've really set the story and discribed it well and i think i understand the last part. It was really imaginative to think of writing Briseis was a great read.

great story! you write really well and the passion between briseis and achilles is great. the only thing i'd say is those italicized "thoughts" from Briseis kind of disrupt the story's rhythm and don't add much to her character development. or maybe it's just too many exclamation points.

this is such a great story. not too soppy and remains true to the emotions of the characters in the movie. waiting for more