I love this.

I can honestly say I cried when she was talking about everyone going away.
it was still an overall "aw" worthy story. =D

This was very sweet. You've got their personalities quite on point. I have to say, it's a bit creepy that they'd end up married after having a relationship like this, but I still do think it's quite possible this would have happened. And, for now, it's very, very sweet.

Oh, this has to be just a cutest thing ever! I think I prefer this type of relationship between those two, but if you pretend this didn't happen and Tonks was a bit older, it isn't so bad. It's better than Tonks and Sirius, anyway. Which is just plain weird and wrong as they're second cousins... I digress. Great writing style and mechanics, as always. Great job over all! God bless,
bookwurm23

Sweet!

Aww this was very sweet, I like how Dora cheered Lupin up with her visit and her letter. And I liked how they are friends as well.

aw! i love these dora pieces that you write. they are so cute and hit home. the part when dora wouldn't speak and they started talking about everyone leaving her made me cry. it was just so unfair for her and she was just a little child. and i thought that her parents were expecting too much froma little girl to be good and gentle. it felt like they were putting a lot of pressure on her. i felt so bad for dora! it was so sweet at teh end though! love this lots!

That was so amazingly wonderful! You really captured the moment(s). Your!Dora is very, very, VERY cute! I love this fic! Your writing style is brilliant! Keep up the great work, and good luck with all your fics!

I really liked this story. Your style reminds me a lot of one of my favorite authors, Jane Austen. I've always loved stories that show the world through the eyes of children and this one is very good.

~KitKat

aww. that was a cute different side of there relationship. i love how persistent she was in reminding him about sunday in her letter, and his she called her self "his dora." XD

This was wonderful! I love your Dora.

Oh my goodness, I practically have *tears* in my eyes from the sheer beauty and innocence and purity of this story. This, to put it quite frankly, ROCKS. I see nothing wrong with it. It tugs just right at the heartstrings and...oh. Gosh. Just *beautiful*. Thank you for writing this.

This is one of the warmest story I've ever read. I kept smiling when I was reading it^^ Really, it DOES make your lips make a little smile. It's kind of sad, yeah, but this fic have sadness that's mixed with happiness. I liked how you ended this fic best though, it was really wonderful.^^

And thus, Tonks and Lupin have a charming sort of chemistry even without romantic elements. Also, young Dora is EXACTLY as one would imagine a tiny Tonks would be: precocious, demanding, adorable, self-centered, and sweetly loving.

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Its so adorablly cute!!

MUST ADD TO FAVORITES *clicks button* YAY!!

no seriously. i love this addition to the "Dolls"Verse. ^-^

i hope against hope that's theres another one, but i have yet to look and well the surprise awaits so i end this review.. now. ^_^