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luvien azure
2006-05-10 . chapter 6
Hey! Nice story here! Hmm... for some reason, I can't help but feel that we're writing along the same lines! (I'm currently writing a SIGN fic too.) Which is cool! I'd love to see how you develop your story! Hahah! I like the way you put song lyrics into your story; they really go well with the scenes you write. Hope to see more of this! *Smiles*
Steeple333
2005-09-28 . chapter 6
;_; It's so nice. I adore this story. It's so realistic and sweet. Yay.
Steeple333
2005-09-28 . chapter 5
Poor Mimiru-chan. ;_;

Again, I'm amazed that you can capture their personalities.
Steeple333
2005-09-28 . chapter 4
Oh, naughty Sora-myon. >_<

Still, I adore this chapter as well! I like how everyone reacts, and they're in character, to boot! ^o^
Steeple333
2005-09-28 . chapter 3
Ha-ha! Vaguely MimiruxSora!

Er... maybe not. XP I do like that pairing, though it isn't popular. Anyway, I like this! ^_^
Steeple333
2005-09-28 . chapter 1
Haha, take that, Mr. Sucky Tsukasa's Dad! >=D

I like this. Must read on~
Macky
2004-12-31 . chapter 6
Nice story so far please continue.
whoever
2004-09-07 . chapter 6
This is a really great story. Keep up the good work.
ps: i like how you portrayed Sora.
NeoSparda
2004-08-31 . chapter 6
that was so sad...if it isn't to much trouble, could you please continue? (Yes I know, I'm not like the other reviewers who are like "MORE NOW!" I write Sci-fi so I know how much trouble it is to write fanfiction, trust me sometimes I stop in the middle of a scene cause of writers block) unlike the other reviers I'm sure you must have gotten I'm not gonna rush you, I WILL however put this on my favorites list cause it's such a good read, anyway, goodluck with the rest of the story!
MJP
2004-08-31 . chapter 6
This is great! I can't wait for more!

I personally think that the ambiguity brought across in Ann/Tsukasa's dream could have been rounded out with a little more insight into the situation... I have no evidence to believe that Ryo/Bear situation is causing direct stress. I can see it as a component of the switching up into this new life... do you see what I'm saying? :-/

Feel free to E-mail me if you want to workshop it a little. I love the after-//SIGN genre of .hack fanfic. I can't wait to see the next chapter! ^_^
MJP
2004-08-31 . chapter 1
“Everything’s recorded,
Kintaro-Kusake
2004-08-25 . chapter 6
M...Angst/Romance Story, I loves it ^_^

Great story so far, bring more chapters to make us happy. ^_^
Zero-Vision
2004-08-22 . chapter 6
Sora just jumped right out of the anime in tis fic. you have his character down pat ^_^. update soon eh. poor ann
Lost Pens
2004-08-21 . chapter 6
Nice story. I wonder if I'll even start mine.
Gray17
2004-08-10 . chapter 3
Excellent story, but I feel compelled to point out that at the point it time this would most likely take place, Sora would still be suffering from Morganna's wrath and be unable to do anything in the real world. I'm sure you already know this, but like I said, I felt compelled to at least make a mention of it.
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