Another fantastic chapter! I can't wait for another!

I absolutely, completely am in love with this story.

That being said though, there's parts that do need smoothing out, mainly stuff I think a beta-reader or something could help with that, it's nothing big but the flow could be improved.

Still, it's so original and the characterizations (especially Paris) are so on... it's great. Please continue.

oh gush! what will happen next! hope Briseis is ok and hope they can escape!

Please, you have to continue. You just can't leave me hanging! Argh! This is such a great story. Please let them all be safe.

That was a great chappie! Finally, they all find a way to escape. Yay!

I loved this chapter! I was really surprized when I started reading that last part! It worked in perfectly. I sure hope everything turns out all right! I can't find anything else to say other than WOW.

that was an awesome chapter ...:sniff: poor hector anyway keep up the good work dude

WOW...great!

Just keep updating!:)

omg i love you to death for updating and making your chapters long! this story is soo good and really original, i love it! anywho, great job, keep up the good work!

Jaimie

At last our heroes and heroines are having some success against their evil captors! And the H/A in this chapter was especially good, they are my favorite couple and I appreciate that. Now if that guy Paris sent to bring help from Troy can only get there! More soon please!

i really really REALLY love your story. im glad that there are still some good stories out there and keep it up!

PS i loved your other story as well (All the Kings Men, i think it was called that)

LOVE this story. And I happen to be a Paris fan so I am especially happy at his protrayal. Yeah, he's young and afraid and not soo brave but for those he loves, he's faced his fears and shown he is a man of honor. COOL!

I really hope that everyone in the end recognizes Paris' bravery and he finally wins respect, respect he lacks in almost every other story I've read with him in it.

Also like how PAris himself doesn't realize he's being honorable and brave, he thinks Helen will reject him b/c he isn't the strongest or bravest of men.

Hope we get good reunion momnets between Biseis, hector and Paris. Love this family.

Sprout180

you know what i realy love about ya fic... is... that all the Andro and Heccy bits are a hell of alot longer than the others. Please let them live, and let paris and helen die slow deaths. JOY!

fantastic. i love the way you intertwine each story together. i'm a big fan of Achilles/Briseis so i focus more on that part of the story; but i read all the others with more interest than usual and i thank you for that.

just a question though: if hector is so badly wounded, how can he keep going? just confused a little.

omg I hope they escape I can't wait for more.