Reviews for More Than This

Reviews For: More Than This

olive-girl-92 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abusethat was really good!! brilliant writing
chezlovesyou 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abusegreat story- it really gives Tony's character a real deep emotional side, and i think it is perfect. amazing job!
Heather McFey 2005-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI read this a while ago and just re-discovered it. Excellent fic. I can hear Tony telling this story, you got him bang on. Love the short exchange between T and M, cute but not too fluffy. Very well written, love the little details you put in. I shall definately be checking out more of your stuff.
bookworm03 2005-09-10 ch 1,	abuseI just watched the episode this is sort of based on and then I noticed this fic. I loved it. I think you did a spectacular job, and the ending was kind of sad:(. At least we know how season 4 ends though...I really enjoyed it...
kokiri fairy 2004-07-25 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant just like your other fics.
fisch24 2004-06-21 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is a great fan fic! You capture Michelle and Tony really well.
kittyfantastico 2004-06-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, thank GOD! I've finally found some 24 fanfic that meets all of my requirements! (Tony/Michelle, well-written, completely in character, sweet but not sickly, and realistic within the world of 24. Oh yes, I'm a hard one to please;) Anyway, this is great! Are you going to continue it? I know it kinda reads like a oner-parter, and because it's all introspective, that's probably what you intended it is, but I would love to read more. I'm really interested in your take on the effect this secret has on their relationship, and on Tony as a person. It seems like you've just tempted us with all the wonderful angst that you could write! I like your style of writing a lot. I also love and adore your characterisations, particularly Michelle. She is a difficult character to write, because we know so little about her, but you've got her seriousness and sweetness perfect here, and you've also given her a more playful side, but one that is totally in keeping with her character on the show. I really hope you do decide to continue this!
unthinkable 2004-06-16 ch 1,	abuseVery intensive! Very good emotions! I'm looking forward to more from you.
ILuvCarbyFuzz 2004-06-14 ch 1,	abusegreat job! I liked it a lot...keep up the good work!
Joe's girl 2004-06-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is excellent! Well written, well thought out. Keep going. I'll be interested to see where it leads.
dealan 2004-06-13 ch 1,	abuseVery very nice. I loved how true this rang. Your characterization of Tony is spot on, and the dynamics btw him, Jack and Michelle are wonderful. Seen in the light of the events of S3 on makes this more tragic and ironic. The dialogue flowed well too. Major snaps.
CLShipper 2004-06-13 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story! Tony’s love for Michelle shines through so brightly. This story really gets your readers inside Tony’s mind and heart! It is so totally engrossing! Captivating piece! It deeply touches your readers!
Mandi5 2004-06-13 ch 1,	abuseThis was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Bluenose 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseOne of the things that never made sense to me about Day 3 was the way that Jack adn Tony excluded Michelle from their plotting. I mean, she was prepared to break ranks and support Jack, she was prepared to commit treason rather than have Tony support her, AND Tony's married to her! This story answered a few of the questions, at least as far as Tony's mindset was concerned. I love the way you brought out the closeness between Tony and Michelle, and how much they had come to depend on each other so quickly. And you're right, extra poignant given the finale.

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