I liked this very much. You wrote it very well, and the inclusion of the prayer worked wonderfully.

I never thought I'd feel pity for Wormtail. Well done.

it's just so... I don't know, loved the prayer in there it worked wonderfully

I like how you incorprated the prayer. One thing: every time the speaker changes, a new paragraph starts. Two people never speak in the same paragraph.

disturbing. trully shows wormtail's pitiful fatith to voldemort. very well done.

I liked. Lovely vacation from all the stupid-little-evil-rat-let's-make-fun-of-him.

That was perfectly sad and horrible. Well done. *sad aplause*