Just finished reading your story. Loved it! I've just discovered DA, and I'm only up to Haven - can't wait to see it! Of course I love Logan, and can't think why anyone would pair Max with anyone else! Thanks again!

Hm!

I read this fine story and I quite can't put my finger on my feelin' toward it!

It reminds me strong of a typical episode from S1, juts with a bit more Logan thrown into it! (and maybe more bruieses than usual :) )

Somehow it’s quite a fantastic mix!

The Red’s were true to their creepy nature. Which I liked since I remember them!

Well told many details and scenes; thrilling the Jam Pony intruding!

I was like reading a script, never shown and broadcasted!

Ok then, more stories to go….

Peace

Out

myx

ps.

I loved the Scene where the Red flew off of Logan’s Building! So cruel and nevertheless great!

(i really wanted to see his face!)

Pss. The fight sequences you write are kind of….short., but they also sting on the other hand.

WOW! Best Dark Angel fic I have read so far! Keep it up. MORE MORE MORE

Ehehehe, it's great, as USUAL. Only one problem, need a sequel! Aw, c'mon! You've got loyal fans here waiting! I swear I'll R/R the sequel, swear! Love your stories, they RULE!

now that was good! :)

That was a great end to a wonderful story. you have a good writing style and had well thought out ideas within the story. Keep writing as i can't wait to read your next story.

Wow! This is a spectacular fic, and the ending is great too! You did an excellent job, thank you sooo much!

It all ended too soon. I mean your revised "Blinded" and the series, too.

I love your work and saw that a couple of fans had said you were one of their very favorite writers at Dark Angel Reflections. This was on their thread for writers/fan fiction.

http:dafans.proboards9.com/

I so wish you would start writing another. One with lots of season 1 Max and Logan.

Thank you so much.

Man! I have'nt check FF.net for awhile then, boom! You go on and update. Hell, you're real good. How old are you anyway? Me, I'm a beginner newbie. I suck. Oh well, I'd guess I'll get better. Meanwhile, keep updating! This is on my Favorites List!

So far so good. Im looking forward to the next post. Do it soon, please!

that was great! i really loved this chapter especially the end! brilliant! please post more soon i need all the M/L i can get:)

ME

You have made so many DA fans so happy with this story.

If I had any money I would send it to you.

I'm smiling so big right now.

Thank you.

yay! i cant wait for her to recuse him!

BR

Terrific...love the story and all the added detail...looking forward to next week:)

This revamped version is great-the extra material is certainly adding to the story, rather than slowing things down. As always, the action sequences are very effective. Good luck in Vegas!