Hiya! This was a good one-shot...I really liked getting to read another fic about Miiru besides the one I wrote myself ^_^;; (I was beginning to think no one knew who she was -_-). I think I'm going to have a tough time catching the real drama and pathos of Miiru's later life, but you've done a great job!

Take care!
^_~. Starry Knight

I like this. It doesn't show Miru and Ren as saints who's love was used, but it doesn't show them as pure evil eaither. You did a great job on it.

(Only Mrs. Tasuki, by the way)

I was hoping someone would do something like this. Very nice. You have a way of truly getting into the character's minds and hearts. Maybe you could make it long, perhaps by thinking of some grand adventure they could embark on, and have them having to flee when people find out they're brother and sister...oh! Just find some way to write more! You have very beautiful, poetic way of writing, and I love it!

The only problem is it's too short! I wish it was longer!

-Mrs. Tasuki