Oh my gosh, I absolutely loved this! Especially the way that you managed to capture each character. Pure Love!

This is the funniest rendition of Garet's character I've ever read. I'm not usually one for slash pairings either, but this was impressive.

Wow, that was... really good! And not a pairing I'd ever considered before! A very unique one, to be sure! It was very well done and seemed quite believeable to me. Good job! I especially liked how, while you could have ended it after the first part, you continued the story and expanded on the relationships between the characters. It was very nice. At first I thought maybe it was a collection of mini-stories with different pairings, but I figured it out pretty quickly and was very impressed. The quality of your writing is fantastic. Keep it up!

Phwee... well, after reading that, I think any chance of me winning Dot's contest have just slid down the drain (speaking of which, I ought to go post mine...). . This is outstanding! I cannot compete. But then I wasn't writing to win, anyway. XD I wish you luck!

That was good.

don't like Yaoi in the least, but i think this was a good fic.

o-O;; i dunno what it's called, probebly the same as a Sheba/Garet, or Jenna Ivan, but I don't write either so i have no clue.

I wonder about pairing names all the time when i Write Karst/Felix.

Felix: . you had to bring that up...

This is an awesome story! I can't wait to see how it turns out _ I love Felix/Sheba and Garet/Ivan! (What is that called anyways? Certainly not Gasshipping, that sounds bad.)

Continue, I hope you get good reviews!