wow. you wrote this in 75 min? it's such a nice little fic. you managed to put a lot in few words. impressive.

Awesome!!

Interesting. Me like! Sequel please?

hmm...ponderous

I like Clow's reaction a lot. Cerberus's fits very well too.

Nice chapter! Keep up the good work!

That's cool! You should continue it!

cool. i never read anything like this, it's really unique

Oh, loved it! I'm afraid I can't be much more coherent right now. ^_^ But it's great, really.

They're all wonderfully in character, and I enjoyed the bits of humour here and there. :)

wo~ lovely piece. written in only 75 mins eh? very cool. I like how you managed to capture alot of thier character even in a ficlet as short as this. Like Clow's awry sense of humor and Yue's stubborn streak. Hehe even Ceberus got a few in with his actions more than his words (like the last part when he looked from his master to Yue as if to say, "Well why didn't you make him more like me?"

I really loved it. ^_^

oh, this is very very nice. how the HELL did u manage to write this in 75 mins?!

Lovely. Nice work.

*chokes on her laughter and dies, then is painfully revived*

"If I fall over, combust, or otherwise fail..."

I have a very weird sense of humor. But this is really good. *came back late from her trip, so has no brain function left* I'll give you a more coherent review later on Tsukimine Shrine. *slinks away to sleep*

Oh, that's so sweet! NIce to have Kero there for desapping, but you can really feel the chemistry between Yue and Clow.