If what you said in the description was true, then why did you post this...thing?! You know that it's crap! Post some better, newer stories and make a name for yourself, don't post your old stories.

Wow...this SUCKS! I hope you aren't 16. If you are you need to realize the wonders of grammar, spelling, and mature writing. If you are under 16, good luck passing 3rd grade with that writing. Use a spell checker or a beta reader before you post any more cra...err...stories.