I just realized that that was the end of the story. Obviously I wasn't paying any attention once I finished the chapter...oh well! Great story! Loved it lots! Can't wait to see what other plots you have up your sleeve! Sayonara for now!

Yay! Sara's keeping her baby! _ Can't wait to find out what she names her! Update soon please!

This was an interesting story. I liked how Sara and Grissom ended up in the end. I liked Grissom's little bonding with the baby. It took me a couple of minutes to figure out what Catherine had slipped on, that was funny. (I'm so slow sometimes.)

Just a couple of points though, regarding adoption, which made the ending very difficult for me to swallow. 1) It is not the doctor's place to ask a mother about her decision regarding possibly making an adoption plan for her baby, doctors and hospitals have nothing to do with the process, 2) It's Sara's choice which adoptive parents her child goes to, not the adoption agencies's, and no agency would push her to allow her parents to adopt the baby, 3) Most states which allow for Grandparents's rights insist that the child have lived with the grandparents for a specific amount of time, usually six months, before the grandparents have any rights at all, 4) No mother is ever pressed to make a decision minutes after a baby is born, in fact, in many states that would be illegal.

I just finished the story and let me say it was absolutely wonderful. My Dream was funny, sad, morally challenging and a tear jerker - everything you always want in a good story. What a great job you've done! I look forward to more stories from you. And feel free to write a sequel.

Ow that was so sweet, great ending ...

Nepeace

This is a very good story-I had my doubts about the three year business, but you got Gris and Sara just right in this update-thanks for a good read.

Loving the story and all i can say is more please.

More please ... you can't stop here

Angelique

That was good-poor Sara-what a pair of idiots she has for parents!

I love the reactions-poor Warrick!

This works-now what?

Thanks!

This story is amazing, and you're quick on updates too...I love that!

This is a good story, can't wait for more

oh man the crap is going to hit the fan now. Please update soon

I am really enjoying this story. That flashback scene was touching, and the cliffhjanger...well, I just have to hate you for that. :-

This is so incredible. So, you're into the 'delayed gratification' thing. Making us wait six chapters to find out what happen to Sara was clever and well worth the wait. Very intense. Nice surprise there at the end with Sara's parents showing up. Can't wait to read what happens next. Great job!

Grissom was pissed off! Now THAT'S rare! Cool chapter, update soon please!