 Purrsia 6/27/06 . chapter 2Ok, I've now gotten through this part.
The trial was excellent. Merla there and taunting him was a nice touch! I like Allura's naive factor here too - she never saw that sentence coming bwahaha!
I can kinda guess how she'll manage to get him out of it...which should prove deliciously interesting. Looking forward to reading the next installment. I can't really add much that other reviews haven't already pointed out...it's all well-earned praise _ |
 Purrsia 6/27/06 . chapter 1Cheeze - been listening to those encodes again. Just finished part one.
Wow! Nicely done once again. And that *was* quite a surprise you threw in there, but very interesting to see how it turns out.
You had some great descriptive passages (I liked how you described Haggar's grip on her staff when Merla was rubbing her the wrong way LOL). You also did a great job showing everyone's emotions, motivations and had characterization down to a science! You make it look so easy _
The Doomite exchanges were great, and I also enjoyed the banter of the Voltron Force toward the end of the chapter.
Okay, time to listen to part two. I'm kicking myself for not checking this series out sooner! |
 NepenthesMiranda 1/8/06 . chapter 2This poignant story concluded for me with hurried heartbeats and a grand excitement knowing that there is already a sequel posted-you write Allura's perfect innocence and her misunderstood emotions for Lotor so well! I can't help but think that the rose is blooming once again... |
 Kitsune6 11/16/04 . chapter 2Okay, I didn't see this when I reviewed your other story. This is going well, and the writing is still the quality of stuff people pay money for. I'm not sure where you'll take this from here, but keep up the good work. |
 Goddess Virage 6/17/04 . chapter 2 dude, I'm an idiot @_@ I read ch. 1 last night and never realized there was a second chapter...
yeah.
Anyways. You are a godly wiriter, this is fabulous _; I hope to see some more Voltron stuff from you, your characterizations are wonderful, and I love all the little interaction bits. It really adds alot to the entire peice _ |
 GoddessVirage 6/16/04 . chapter 1 oh yes! A sequel! Thank gods, that other installment left me so...unhappy and happy all at once _ And this one shall be continued as well ::is gleeful:: Thanks for continuing this _ |
 Starlette Rose 6/15/04 . chapter 2 I am sitting here slack-jawed after reading this sequel. Wow, this is truly a piece of art. The way all the characters were woven together just blew me away. You are by FAR the most talented fanfic author I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Please, please contibue this saga. You can't leave it at this. |