I totally LOVED it!

KOOLIES

I thought for sure they were going to kiss! Nice job!

is that the end of this one?

Is this a one shot then? I hope not. I need a good fanfiction...

awesome chapter! i love it. keep up the great writing! :-)

wow this is a really good story!! update soon it will be interesting to see how it turns out! :) hugs

Simply PERFECT!
I read Marauder Chronicles a long time ago, and this one is, if possible better. Hope you add more to it soon... This is definitely a fanfic I'd try and visit every single day to see if there's an update... there seems to a lack of briliant stories like yours.

Anyway, hope it didn't end right there...

“And are you going to donate your puffed up lips?

This is really good. Just 1 question, are you going to write more?

this is really really great..i was really sad when it ended! i was so into it! write another chapter please?!?!?

P.S Marauder Chronicles was a stroke of brilliance.

Awesome! :D

Thought it was about time i said Hi.

I've literally only just found this extra 'Revisited' bit of THE MARAUDER CHRONICLES.

I read the original months ago and was the first FanFic i read and the best i have read since.

I only wanted to say that your an amazing writer who has one MASSIVE fan. write more about anything and I'll be sure to read them.

Luv Ur Work,
StephBlack

I'm thinkin you should write some more on this, becuase i really liked it, but something tells me you won't. I liked the little poem in the beginning.

I loved reading the Marauder Chronicles- and this chapter was so good, and very detailed.You are a great writer!