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Reviews for: Darkstalkers The Series: Dawn of the Huitzil
Baron Hausenpheffer
2005-05-10 . chapter 4
Huh. Well, I was expecting some grande finale, but it looks like the story isn't QUITE over yet. Old Pyron has finally made his appearance, so that must mean the action is about to get hot (pun intended). My only nitpick is a little mistake in the third paragraph from the end: "manner" should be "matter". Otherwise, no problems.

I look forward to the next chapter, which I assume will come about just as soon as you figure out another word ending with "-ation". Hahaha! Here is a little list of ACCEPTABLE ones that you could use: mastication (chewing), sensation, trepidation (?), calculation, and gesticulation ("talking with your hands"; my personal favorite). Of course, none of those have a darn thing to do with this story, but... oh, well. If you're REALLY in a pinch, use "tribulation". Good luck, and update soon! ^_^
Baron Hausenpheffer
2005-05-09 . chapter 3
Excellent! This was probably my favorite chapter so far! I'm glad that Anakaris made an appearance, although it's too bad that he didn't put up more of a fight (he has GOT to be the most underappreciated of all the Darkstalkers). I didn't expect Lord Raptor to show up either, but it's awesome that he did. I'm assuming his weakness is being caused by the lack of human emotional energy he's used to feeding off of. Finally, I was relieved that ol' Victor was still alive and well. Kick some robo-butt, Gerdenheim!

All-in-all, another extremely good chapter. On to the next one!
Baron Hausenpheffer
2005-05-09 . chapter 2
This was another mighty good chapter. I sort of think that the whole "icebergs = ice age" thing might be bad science, but with werewolves and mermen running about, I'm not going to concern myself with that. Hahaha!

All-in-all, a good chapter. Next!
Baron Hausenpheffer
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
Man, I LOVE this so far! At first I couldn't believe my eyes: "A Darkstalkers fic where they actually act like they do in the show/game? Say it ain't so!" Nonetheless, it is, and I am much happier for that. ^_^

I'll be sure to read the rest of this soon!
1324
2005-02-02 . chapter 4
nice

(walks away speechless)

wait a second, need more faster updates

plz
Winged Wolf Warrior
2004-08-25 . chapter 4
Wow, that is really well written, just amazing man, keep it up.

~3W
Ravens Cross
2004-08-17 . chapter 4
A very exciting chapter and a well written one at that. So much drama this saga holds. I guess saga would be the right word to describe this. :) I love it and I can't wait to read more. Well done babe, well done.
Ravens Cross
2004-08-16 . chapter 3
Wonderfully written!...as all of your works are. It has been so long since you have elaborated on this that I could barely remember the characters. After I read a bit, and of course with the help of your descriptive writing, it all started coming back to me. I really enjoyed this chapter and I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Bravo to another job well done, my love.
Ravens Cross
2004-06-29 . chapter 2
Wow! This chapter was really intense. When you write...I get these perfect visions in my head. I love your writing style and you make things easy to understand...even for those of us that are hard to explain things to.
Ravens Cross
2004-06-14 . chapter 1
'Twas a great first chapter. It kept me reading and wondering. I like it very much! Only one thing...Quatos shouldn't lean on his tent...he might fall over...lol!
redskin122004
2004-06-14 . chapter 1
Nice intro. Following the anime, sort of. Wish i could of think something like this. Too bad for me.

LAterz
Jon Badwolf
2004-06-14 . chapter 1
Hsien-Ko... funny. Anyway, I like very much. BY the way, the Rogue Squad of the VG University is up. Check it out.
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