Did you mean Bobby would get frostbite? He's immune to sub-zero temperatures.

And what's the second mutation thing?

"He had cream on the tip of his nose. It almost broke me," Jean Paul said softly.

Heh.

Anyway, a favorite moment in this was Bobby comparing Hank to Aslan. I have no idea why, maybe just because it was *Hank* and I used to watch the Narnia movie a long time ago. Also, it's good that Bobby is finally talking to someone. Bobby calmly accepting any anger Jean-Paul might feel for him was oddly endearing, possibly because he *knew* he (alomost) had it coming.

Gods I found this fic months ago, and I never fav'd it or anything, and I just spent the last several hours alternately looking for this and reading others in the hopes that it was this one and just arg. It'a late and I'm going to sleep now, but I promise to give a much better review later.

Also, in case my rambling doesn't make it clear, this was one of my favorite JP/B fics, ever. Because it was so amazing. So. So thanks for writing it.

I started reading this a while back, but then midterms came up and moving and what not. But anyway. Last night I finished it. I hadn't intended to read 17 chapters all in one sitting, but I did.

Fantastic job, I loved this story; it had me squealing and mournful. Your writing style is very precise, only a few spelling mistakes which hardly takes away from the story.

LOVED IT. :D *squee*

oh God, I think I love you.

oddly, I stopped reading at chapter 20 because, for some reason I thought that was the end.

and then I couldn't sleep because it was just too SAD.
so I got back online intending to find me some happy fic, and the page was still up and was JUST about to close the window, when I noticed the next button.

so I continued reading. and it just. ohman.
It was great with the sad ending.
and ** amazing with the happy one.
I almost want to know the 'rents reactions, but then I kinda don't at the same time. :]

I'll just make up my own and have a happy party in my head.

okay first off, sorry i haven't reviewed before (sat and read it all at once!) and i have just one question.
how could you leave it like this?
man i wanna see how bobby's dad reacts!
just saying...don't mind me, i get way too into what i read...~blushes~ can't help it...
so, just wanted to say BRAVO!
^-^

Finally finished it and I love it. It was mature, well thought-out, well-written, romantic. Just all around great!

Still reading and enjoying this fic very much. It's good to see the couple's interactions with other teammates. I thought Scott was a bit too overbearing in this chapter. But I liked it and am still eagerly clicking on the chapters.

I told myself I was only going to allow myself to read 2 more chapters today. But you hooked me and I couldn't stop reading. This last chapter was completely sexy. Loved every sentence!

Why aren't the X-men comics this amazingly good? Just wanted to say that I'm really loving this story. You do a great job at capturing the angst that someone feels when they love someone they can't have. And the storyline is crisp and exciting. You have such talent!

Wow, this is off to a great start with solid dialog and good descriptions. Vivid enough that I feel like I'm there. It's also nice to read a fanfic that takes its time and doesn't rush. Onto the next chapter and looking forward to more!

this story is just SO wonderful! my all time fav JPxB story ^o^ hope you update soon!
such a cliffhanger 0__0!

that was SO hot *w*~

i really love the way you have Jean Paul and Bobby's relationship. it seems more realistic then what most people do (the whole, i'm gay and your straight. so let's have sex before the 1st chapter is up deal) lol.
i like how you're slowly easing your way through their feelings of one another ^-^v

What a lovely way to end this, with the beginning of a new, improved Bobby/Jean-Paul relationship.

Thank you for this chapter, and for the whole story.