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| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-20 ch 4,  | abuseNice! To me, Phlox always seemed a bit of a matchmaker, even though he denies it. He's definitely a romantic. |
| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-20 ch 3, | abuse*sigh* With Trip and T'pol's reccord, I can't help but worry at their ability to completely misunderstand eachother. Communicate people! |
| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-20 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. Good analogy, and good advice from Malcolm, surprisingly. Love this line "Just when you think you understand them, boom! She makes me so damn mad, I just want to...well, shoot something!" |
| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseTrip's so mean, it's horrible! Ok, it's wonderful in all its emotional complexity, angst and passion. But I feel bad for T'pol. :( Great job in being able to explore a range of deep emotions. |
| harper20 2007-03-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat has to be one of the funniest chapters I have ever read, Using an engine as an analogy for a relationship was great! |
| tlc 2004-06-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseReally nice story! Hopefully things do turn out that way. Sequel would be great. |
| Dodie 2004-06-25 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really nice story. I think you have the characters down very well. I would love to see a sequel. |
| Cherilynn64 2004-06-22 ch 4, | abuseI think your story was great - I really hope you write a sequel! Keep at it!! |
| tracy-thecubedone 2004-06-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseoh yeah i'd say a sequel is in order. PHLOX! well done. |
| Phaser Lady 2004-06-21 ch 4, | abuseGreat finish. Please, continue. Pretty please? This story line has so many possibilities. There's so much left to be told. |
| morgannia 2004-06-21 ch 4, | abuseoh, i just found this story & it's really good. i think you did an excellent job of capturing the characters, T'Pol in particular. this defintely deserves a sequel |
| Rogue28 2004-06-20 ch 4, | abuseI would love to see a sequel to this story! It's great. I think you should write it from Phlox's point of view, because I think that in the glimpses we saw of him, he was the best characterized. Great job! ~Rogue |
| SG1SamFan 2004-06-20 ch 4, | abuseYay! What a great ending, though I'm sad to see it end :(. Pleez, *pleez*, do a sequel! - SamLover |
| Sash29 2004-06-20 ch 4, | abuseLoved it! I went back and read the whole thing again -- the better to enjoy the conclusion, you know! -- and it was just as good the second time around. The characters were bang on and the ending was great. I can just hear Trip yelling "I love ya, dammit!". I would definitely like to see this story continued. |
| plumtuckered 2004-06-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this and would love to see a continuation! Please do write a sequel! Thanks! |