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I'm thinking of tasting blood now...thank you for screwing up my mind even more. Love this effin' story.

Loved it!

Hmm. Nostalgia -and- vampires. A rare treat. I've always wanted to write a vampire Pan story myself. I really enjoyed this.

Im not sure if you ever meant to continue this story past this point. It would work as a good conclusion. I think that if you did choose to continue this story you should have Wendy and her brothers find out about the lost boys and Peter. I think it would be very interesting to read your take on how their entire life, relationship and whatever would be affected by the Darling children knowing these details. I am very interested in your story and think it is a great idea. I think that you are very creative and have done well with this story. Thank - you.

Nashty. Very dark indeed, but then Peter dark from the right side? Ash is a much better Lost Boy name than any of mine, and you've got the would-be Lost Boy side of Billy down very well. BWell begun and ended, '** off'is a little off, and occasionally Mullins sound a little to sophisticated, but apart from that, excellent.

Very yummy! ;p

Heh. Fun! I like the concept, and the execution was good, too (pun fully intended...).

You know that it's entirely your fault that I find myself scouting for stories about Robert Mullins and Billy Jukes now. [grin]

When I first came across your stories, I was mostly interested in the Hook/Pan dynamic- but this story with Mullins and Jukes is delightful. I'm very fond of the whole fatherly vibe thing. Well done!

I thought this was a great story! Vampire Peter, that story idea I have played with a few times, though no fics are finished. As well, the idea of what Peter could be if he wasn't really human, what makes him immortal and the lord of Neverland? I hope to put up some Peter Pan fics myself. Love yours though, keep writing!