Aww,sweet work here!I love the second person view you could use that way!Great characterisation especially in the later scenes!I love the tension and slight similarities after so many years!

That was good, though I'm afaid I'm getting a bit sick of Remus/Sirius slash. Just one of my pet peeves. Not that I have anything agaisnt slash...its just that Sirius and Remus are like brothers. I don't know why people don't understand it...You love each other without it being romantic...

Sorry bouts that. It was still incredible, despite the fact that its an overworked plot.

Happyness in a word document D Gotta love it

aw! :') (

Aww, that was so sweet! I liked the fight in the middle, it seemed like something that would happen between them after their reunion. And the point of view was nice. It was different, which is good!

:*:silver-sunn101:*:

Aw. The sweetness. Remus and Sirius slash can never be overdone, cause I'm always looking for more of it!

Great job. Loved it. It brought a smile to my face.

Cheers,

H.D.D.