Well thought.
Well written.
What more is there to say?

That was a cool little story you wrote there. It almost makes you want to know more about this potions master that Hogwarts has employed. I hope that you can write a story that stems into the thoughts of our favorite greasy haired git.

Well-written but what I really want someone who tackles this topic to explain is why this was his worst memory. He regrets being a Death Eater, surely he has worse memories than this.

Great characterization, good organization, and great overall job!

Interesting. I thought he would be more vindictive, but this characterization works well.

-paradox