wow. absolutely amazing--i loved it!

though i think you need to continue the story-it seems to me that these experiences would change how the rest of the quest goes. people learned things they didn't learn in the real story so they would react differently to dif situations.

anyway, i think you need to label this fic done and you'd get more people to read it.

loved it!

keep writing xD

A great last chapter. I liked the bit where they all thought they were in Overheaven.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Frodo was singing that song again for Merry.

What a great chapter. I almost fell out of my chair laughing when Pippin got sick from eating too much lembas, that was very well done.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Sam, Merry and Frodo were reunited.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Gimli was rmembering the farewell feast at Rivendell.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Merry asked what Legolas had done to bring him back and he told him about it. Another of my favorite parts was when Pippin had eaten nearly all the lembas.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Legolas was bringing Merry back.

Another great chapter. i liked the part where Sam and Frodo were both taking care of each other and the part where Boromir was taking care of Pippin.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Aragorn was taking care of Sam and Frodo.

Another great chapter. It will be intresting to see if Aragorn actually catches up to Gollum.

another great chapter. I knew Gollum would catch up to them sooner or later. It will be intresting to see what happens with that storyline.

Another great chapter. It's going to be intresting if Gollum ctahces up to them. My favorite part was when Boromir was comforting Pippin.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Merry thought he was with his grandma.

Another great chapter. I enjoyed it all.