wow that was awesome! and they were in chaarcter too! Hey when are you gonna update this or whatever?

that was cool please write more

Update soon! Please! This is a great story and I really want to know what happens!

wow, i liked it... a lot. This was like nothing I've read before (mostly b/c I stay out of the whole real world/ movie world type fics in general, but this story sounded good and it was. I can't wait until the next chapter, b/ this story has a lot of developing story lines that are really interesting. Great job!

Wow, you have a real talent! And quite a storyline--you've got me curious!

Very good! A lot of realism, character, and very dramatic, though I'd like to know why suddenly she's happy, it seemed very sudden. I love Jack, and there are hints of Jack/Sally, yes?

Please write more.

Hi CB its me Pumpkinprincess from Halloween Town.org. Anyway I just finished reading your story and I must say you have talent. And your pictures for this story are good too.