Please finish this story

It very much saddens me that this story isn't finished, and seeing the last time it was updated, probably never will be. I'm adoring this story. It's unique and fun to read in an angsty kind of way.
I know that you'll probably never touch this again, but I'll keep my fingers crossed and add this to my story alerts.

Awesome Story. So, I went to get the next chapter and it wasn't there. Then I found out that the awesome story hadn't been updated in years. I don't get why it stopped.

Wow This is a Really good story! Are you planning on updating?

You've read Pretty maids in all a row, i can tell *__*

omg i love this series, i can't wait to read more... pms

Oh my god! PLEASE UPDATE! I really want to read what happens next!

Another great chapter--I'm really looking forward to reading more of this epic adventure. This is a facinating world you've created, and the dialogue & plot really ring true.

please oh PLEASE update this soon.

please update soon!

I REALLY LOVE both of your broken origin stories. But I have to say two things you did wrong. Spike or William got the name 'William the bloody' when he was alive because the towns people mocked him for his 'bloody awful poetry' thus giving him the name that mortals and demons feared. And there is only one slayer, you put in two slayers during the same time period unless 'Ruby' died like Buffy in the show and came back to life calling another slayer like Kendra or Faith. LOVE your story. UPDATE CHAPTER 11!

hey,it was awsome!Yet kinda sad,but all is good,like chapter 10 also...so update soon!!

Really enjoyed both Broken OriginI and II..Hope that you will update again sometime soon!

you really got the right style in my opinion. a all nice and fluffy spike is just so horrible wrong.

I love it so far so please,please,please,please,please update.