Woah, great one! This is amazing. My favorite lines:

"And deep they delved, the anvil rang,"

"Yet unaware of fire and fang,"

"Drove them fast to stony tomb."

"And light of stars was in his eyes."

-Lemons.

Rock on! This was really good! I liked it very much. Yes, very much...

this is really nice! you're a good poet.

Awesome poem very well done

"Their friend and mentor had to die."

God, that was amazing. You are truly talented, my friend.