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| XANl 2008-05-14 ch 5,  | abuseGreat start!! I just looked at the date! I hope you check in, people would love to read more of your story!! |
| Ms Severus Kenobi 2006-03-18 ch 5, | abuseI really like where this story is going. It's very interesting. I can only wonder what will happen next. You write very well and I always appreciate good writing. I do hope you will update soon. I know how the whole hectic school thing is. But if you don't update soon, I'm going to keep bugging you, ok? |
| ezza 2005-10-04 ch 5, anon. | abusegreat story. please try and update soon. |
| whatevergirl 2005-05-09 ch 5, | abusevery good! I'm curious what happens! :) |
| Katey of Maychoria 2005-02-23 ch 2, | abuseoops me again. Sorry read your bio wrong, different story finished. forgive? |
| Katey of Maychoria 2005-02-23 ch 1, | abuseack! you say it is *finished* just not posted. argh! fantastic story idea. I beg you please please please post it! |
| Katey of Maychoria 2005-02-23 ch 5, | abuseBah! there is even less here than on the boards of TFN, more please? more! Going on my favorites list! |
| moon's shadow AMJ 2004-10-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseSorry about not reviewing for awhile, my computer has been down for about two months. But anyway, I absolutely love it! I seem to be constantly holding my breath in this story. Now we're really getting into it, so don't stop writing and post a new chapter soon! |
| janeta siri 2004-10-28 ch 5, | abuseobi-wan honestly doesnt look a "hunter" sorry it took so long to reveiw ive been busy with school. I cant wait to see what will happen to obi-wan. -k8t |
| crystal aka sYnergY's Duali... 2004-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abusewow, I like it so far :) update soon |
| moon's shadow AMJ 2004-08-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseAnother great chappie! I am so hyped up for the next chapters. Now we're getting into the story! whoohoo! I can't wait for Obi-Wan and Xanatos to meet! Oh, and don't take too long updating the next chapter, cause you just might lose your new reader ((jk!) but this hurry up!). |
| Obiwanfan 2004-08-12 ch 4, | abuseHey, i really liked this fic. I was bummed to get on a roll reading and find this was the last chapter so far. i really hope you update soon. I really like this fic and i wanna know what crime Obi-Wan doesn't commit... update soon. |
| Wrightergurl 2004-08-06 ch 4, | abuseThe story is awesome!! I love the way you write Obi-wan. please finish soon! |
| janeta siri 2004-08-06 ch 4, | abusethis is great! please update soon -k8t |
| Ivy3 2004-07-24 ch 3, | abuseVery interesting, I can't wait for it to get meatier and for Obi Wan and Xanatos to maybe cooperate, lots of possibilities there. I'm guessing this is AU and Xanatos simply didn't die? |